All Comments on 'Consumerism Ch. 30-34'

I've grown to really hate the MC. Thank goodness most trans women have enough self esteem not to be treated like a whore. This knob was forced into it, he should be alot stronger to fight back against what this fucked up company is doing, especially with having the cop as a safety valve. This story is going south.

@Anonymous I'm sorry you don't like my story. Jamie is meant to be a frustrating character. Her passivity and avoidance drives the plot although she does eventually stand up for herself. She is also not meant to represent a typical transwoman. This is a story where the bad guys win until the very end. I'm sorry if you don't like that. WARNING: SPOILERS: But there is eventually a reversal. It doesn't end with Jamie still enslaved to the corporation.