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ChequamegonChequamegonover 5 years ago
Nice job.

I liked your story. Just a couple things -- check for typos, not many but a few (one I remember is barely instead of barley). On the last man in the event -- he rolled a 3 which should have been pussy not oral, unless I read it wrong. Overall, still a great job.

chrissy2chrissy2about 4 years ago
contest

where can I join in?

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Maverick is an Australian Erotic Short Story author with all content available on his website, maverickkelzar.com. Here, you can join the newsletter, contact Maverick and read stories for free and purchase via KDP. Updated every few days, new content is never far away!