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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

Save her from harm? I don't think so. I pity poor Melody. Your male lead is an abusive asshole.

jpz007ahrenjpz007ahrenalmost 9 years ago
cqtm

You describe an obviously bdsm story's character as 'an abusive asshole'? That's... kind of the point. The really interesting thing will be what happens in chapter two. Because so far, this doesn't really live up to its category.

PS chapter 2's description is what made me read this one. Never underestimate proper advertising.

DoxyTrainerDoxyTraineralmost 9 years agoAuthor
Thank you for sticking with the story!

Breaking part one and part two was a rough choice given the category I picked. I do realize Sci-fi only really kicks in through part two.

The next and last are more so.

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