by Cathleen
This was highly erotic....please write a next chapter....I can't wait to see how far your story will unfold.
Very good story so far I hope you will take us along for her further steps in losing control.
Marvelous pacing and rising steadily toward the climax. An elegant mix of romance and eroticism.
A well written piece, which I thoroughly enjoyed.The sensations, and feelings are well described.