All Comments on 'Controller Ch. 02'

Gotta' say the first chapter didn't do much for me--I'm not a gamer and there was way too much gaming there for me. But I've always loved your stories before, so I decided to read the second chapter. Glad I did! (As I expected) Looking forward to more. BTW, when I say I'm not a gamer--I'm sixty-five and spend my time hiking, gardening, playwriting and (at the moment) dealing with a broken leg--surgery tomorrow. So keep the great work coming--I'm off my feet for the next five or six weeks. Keith in Seattle

Made me tear up.

~M

The angst of being young,and in love.. Do you love the one whose good for you, or the bad choice that will make your life an exciting hell? Kudos on nailing the pain of realizing your first love/crush has feet of clay.

Looool Nate is so dramatic! But what happened needed to happen I suppose, hopefully his young self doesn't use Eli as a rebound