by Kezza67
I think today's temperature will be at boiling point & hope there'll be peace.
I think today's temperature will be at boiling point & hope there'll be peace.
Thank God those people got there before elizabeth was taken anally. I m very happy today.Hurrayyyy the bad guys got their asre kicked.I want them to suffer more. Their cocks & balls should be cut off & rectum should be filled with petrol.
Thank God those people got there before elizabeth was taken anally. I m very happy today.Hurrayyyy the bad guys got their asre kicked.I want them to suffer more. Their cocks & balls should be cut off & rectum should be filled with petrol.
Absolutely loved it. Great job of writing. Post another chapter NOW. LOL
Even in fiction, it's hard to believe anyone could be that vicious and evil. Catsrate the bastard.
the Ct. Yankee
The ending to this tale is exceedingly well done. Details means everything to this author. The punishment administered is quite appropriate. I hope the author continues to write stories he posts/publishes in "Loving Wives." RAG
<p>I mean this is pretty disturbing work, yet it's got a "high" rating? I'm all for revenge, but I had to quit reading it pretty much into the beating because it was too disturbing. What does that say about the people that feel this is justified retribution?</p>
<p>Disturbed is as disturbed likes I guess</p>
-Risq
that got really out of hand but everybody could see it coming. this is fucked up minds again fucked up minds. and after this you have to say some even think they are the good guys.
are made by one guy disguised as two, so the story must not be that great! the Goat character, now, that's refreshing. who won't love to be fucked by a Goat? lol
Well written and apt. For the dumbass who whined that the retribution was just too much, I'd remark that a lot of people do very bad things because they figure there are no consequences, or the consequences are so light as to not instill fear. If we as a society made the punishment fit the crime more often, there'd be a lot less crime. Reread the story...one set of people inflict pain for perverse pleasure, the other inflict pain as punishment for evil performed. If you'd like to take the side of the evil, be my guest; I hope for your sake you are never on the receiving side of well deserved payback, and I'll finish by remarking that if a loved one of yours was brutally treated, if you're a real man, you'd be more inclined to think the way most of us do.
So you are going to trust this women, after she did all of on her on time. Really TRUST her.. You British men must be very STUPID...
Trust her? She was drugged and raped. She might be a bit naive so she made a mistake, serious mistake as it turned out but in the end it comes down to rape. I find other things a bit more off with the story tbh. Why wait a whole day to go in? I can barely accept they wait until after shes been there a night and they wait another day. Even from a strategic standpoint its weird since the best time to go in would be very early in the morning. Add to it they hadnt spotted any guards at all. Naaa that was just a weird way of upping the suspense so she could be rescued just before the anal domination. So that bacame a bit forced sorry. Otherwise quite interesting.
All this worthless nation should be euthanized !!
At least there would be more dog food temporarily !
"1*" !
I liked the story because it is an excellent allegory of many military and former families in the US and the UK. It is a story where 2 innocent and apparently strong people committed to each other have their relationship effected by outside forces and in the end both are irrecoverably changed and pay a high cost to stay together.
There are thousands of families in each country trying to preserve relationships and families due to circumstances beyond their control. You cannot serve 2 - 5 deployments in a combat zone without it effecting a persons mind as deeply as the woman Elizabeth in this story. Heroic spouses coping with what they can not see let alone understand, the only thing keeping them going is love and commitment. In the end many will persevere many will fail, those that make it will be very different people, perhaps always fragile, but persevere they will. The story ending is not what many want, but that is also true of many of these military (or former military) families, the ending may not be a fairy tale ending and the spouse may have to make adjustments in their relationship every bit as significant as the man in this story. Without deep love and commitment it can not happen, but with love as in this story they have a chance. Good story.
Disabled Vet
Excellent punishment to the perpetrators They deserved every wack. Let's hope that the wife can be fixed.
Took 'em longer than it should have, but appropriate. Personally, castration and penectomy would not not be too severe for animals like this. So this was more in line with what I'd hoped for.
If I were Matt, I would have demanded that every bone in both the men's bodies should be broken and there cocks smashed so they could never use them again, not just the caning!
Punishment should fit the crime, these people got off way too easy. I know this is only a story, but people like this probably do exist. I would like to meet one.
I had expected more. Men such as these would have extensive knowledge of and experience with techniques used to facilitate the interrogation of enemy combatants. Exquisite, indescribable pain can be evoked in the human body without causing severe tissue injury. Wielding a cane so that it functioned more like a sword was a sophomoric at best. It would be fine if they wished to cause such damage as the culmination of a carefully designed plan of punishment.
To use this crude intervention as the only physical retribution inflicted by a team of professional intelligence operatives was definitely a disappointment and a wasted opportunity for imagination.
Wow I can’t help but think if this ridiculous setting was in the USA their would be a more fitting retribution probably with a very heavy emphasis on firearms and possibly explosive ordinance.
Really? The police? Get the files. Be prepared to blackmail the government minister. And then burn down the house. It was a search and rescue of Beth, followed by a search destroy of the "Master". An anonymous call to the minister telling him that if he investigates the fire, that all his misdeeds will be made public will back him off fast. No one has any information nout anyone except for Beth.