Conumdrum Ch. 07

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Frank passed out after four strokes!

Matt was driving as quickly as he could. He turned south east onto the A417, which he would follow all the way to the M4. He had memorised the address of the Private Hospital, which was close to Reading. Janet was comforting Beth in the back seat. The morphine had taken complete hold now, and she had slipped into unconsciousness. He handed the mobile phone to Janet.

"Would you call Dr. Henderson, and let him know that we will be at the hospital in about two hours. The number is programmed in. Look for 'Hendy'". Hendy answered almost immediately. Janet passed on Matt's message.

"OK. I shall be there in an hour. Ask for a Doctor Smitherson. He knows that I have a patient coming in with severe trauma. He will treat her injuries, then I can get started on her mental state."

The team had all taken their turn at the punishment. Both the Master and Frank were unconscious, their buttocks ripped and torn, bloodied flesh hanging limply like old rags, they would be scarred for life, and the bruising would never fade. Goat returned to the Master. He held a small rolling pin he had found in the kitchen, and a roll of duct tape. Chubb noticed, and knew immediately what Goat would do.

"Is that necessary?" Goat would not be deterred.

"You know why. One, I owe the boss. And two, how this turd treats women." He was calm and determined. Chubb knew that he could not stop Goat. He reluctantly nodded.

Goat quickly applied a generous amount of the lubricant that the Master was going to use on Beth, to the rolling pin. Then gradually started to ease it into the Master's anus. This intrusion brought the Master round, and he struggled against his bindings, but to little avail. If he had not already suffered a greater pain than this, he would be screaming, as it was he could only moan as the pin sank into his depths. Satisfied that the pin was inserted as far as it could go, Goat ripped off strips of the duct tape, binding the man's buttocks together, wrapping it around his body tightly, so that the makeshift butt plug could not be expelled. Gill watched with horrified eyes. If they did this to her brother, what would they do to her?. Chubb spoke to the woman.

"There should be somebody here in twenty four hours. Unfortunately for you it will probably be the Police. The evidence of your activities is all around, even the plods should find that. We will leave you now."

"What are you going to do with me?" She cried plaintively. Goat replied.

"Nothing. We don't hurt women. Your brother will have a problem though. If the Cops get delayed, he will in all likelihood rupture his bowel. I'm not a Doctor, but I reckon there's a good chance of Peritonitis after that. Bonne Chance!"

To be continued...

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Really? The police? Get the files. Be prepared to blackmail the government minister. And then burn down the house. It was a search and rescue of Beth, followed by a search destroy of the "Master". An anonymous call to the minister telling him that if he investigates the fire, that all his misdeeds will be made public will back him off fast. No one has any information nout anyone except for Beth.

amygdalaamygdalaalmost 2 years ago

Wow I can’t help but think if this ridiculous setting was in the USA their would be a more fitting retribution probably with a very heavy emphasis on firearms and possibly explosive ordinance.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Seven chapters to get to this haphazard retribution?

I had expected more. Men such as these would have extensive knowledge of and experience with techniques used to facilitate the interrogation of enemy combatants. Exquisite, indescribable pain can be evoked in the human body without causing severe tissue injury. Wielding a cane so that it functioned more like a sword was a sophomoric at best. It would be fine if they wished to cause such damage as the culmination of a carefully designed plan of punishment.

To use this crude intervention as the only physical retribution inflicted by a team of professional intelligence operatives was definitely a disappointment and a wasted opportunity for imagination.

26thNC26thNCalmost 6 years ago
For the crime

Punishment should fit the crime, these people got off way too easy. I know this is only a story, but people like this probably do exist. I would like to meet one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Great Story but....

If I were Matt, I would have demanded that every bone in both the men's bodies should be broken and there cocks smashed so they could never use them again, not just the caning!

RedPillRedPillabout 9 years ago

Took 'em longer than it should have, but appropriate. Personally, castration and penectomy would not not be too severe for animals like this. So this was more in line with what I'd hoped for.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Thank you

For not writing the usual wimpy brain dead husband story

betrayedbylovebetrayedbyloveover 9 years ago
Nice

Excellent punishment to the perpetrators They deserved every wack. Let's hope that the wife can be fixed.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
More to the story... It makes you think...

I liked the story because it is an excellent allegory of many military and former families in the US and the UK. It is a story where 2 innocent and apparently strong people committed to each other have their relationship effected by outside forces and in the end both are irrecoverably changed and pay a high cost to stay together.

There are thousands of families in each country trying to preserve relationships and families due to circumstances beyond their control. You cannot serve 2 - 5 deployments in a combat zone without it effecting a persons mind as deeply as the woman Elizabeth in this story. Heroic spouses coping with what they can not see let alone understand, the only thing keeping them going is love and commitment. In the end many will persevere many will fail, those that make it will be very different people, perhaps always fragile, but persevere they will. The story ending is not what many want, but that is also true of many of these military (or former military) families, the ending may not be a fairy tale ending and the spouse may have to make adjustments in their relationship every bit as significant as the man in this story. Without deep love and commitment it can not happen, but with love as in this story they have a chance. Good story.

Disabled Vet

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Deranged Brits pompous garbage !

Real bad this ! "1*" .

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