All Comments on 'Conversations 15'

Excellent story, Mr. Jim. I wonder if he knows The Wolff?

So bizarre. I really enjoyed it.

Did not see that coming. Great twist on on old beginning.

You will need more than just bleach if it is to be a home job.

Damn!!!

Very very good - 5* all the way.

Loved it.

Such a nice change for this category!

But somehow fun, bright, clever and even a little touching. Quite brilliant in fact. This is proving a very satisfying series.

You're starting to be as crazy and convoluted as Sadletramp

Relax it’s harmless. Just a pest, it has been taken care of. Lol

Three less parasites in the world.

With the loving wives section..

Absolutely shit stories by authors who used to be able to write and a profusion of murder porn mixed in with the normal cuck shit.

The quality of writing has deteriorated massively.

Really lazy efforts.

I found it entertaining. Karma strikes again.

5/5

Delicious!

been good. quite good. But for some reason I was just in the mood this morning for this one. Thanks. Keep 'em coming.

Who knew Sleepery could do humor? Nice little story!

I liked it .It was a different take on same subject. Just a little cold but what the heck. Gramps52

Pretty bad. Fortunately short! 😎

Great story, love all the twists

A fun out there story. Reminded me a bit of a Saddletramp story- in a good way. I enjoy stories like this that don’t take themselves seriously.

Lost a star for him being married and expecting a baby no less.

They would be devoured by his own.

I only gave you 5***** because they won't let me give you 10! Great story and I've been enjoying the whole series! I hope you keep it up.

Dark as advertised, and a good little flash tale. We get the conversation and conclusion to what had been a 5 month mission, and honestly I would LOVE to hear that story...Thanks for a nice Saturday morning treat.

RNebular

... How nice to see you again!

You know what's great about this story? You can't even call it a BTB, since the MC couldn't give two shit whether or not his 'wife' was cheating on him. Since she could have easily walked away alive and well if her hubris didn't get in her way, this is way more of a BSB - Bitch's Self-Burn. I don't think this is the first time we've seen one of those around here, but this is definitely the most vivid depiction of such a thing I can recall reading in LW.

So congrats, SleeperyJim - you seemed to have created a brand new sub-category!

"Conversations" is definitely the best ongoing series in the whole of LIT right now. Original, funny, very self-aware, yet never pompous about it. 'Don't know how you will manage to keep it as fresh as it is, author, but, as long as you keep them coming, I'll keep on reading them.

This might be your best one yet.

Hooked

thoroughly enjoyable. I just wish you would post more often.

Holy Crap!!!

A seriously great twist of. tale to start my weekend. Very nicely done.

Many thanks!

enjoy this series.

Dark,yes, but extremely satisfying. Kirby the cleaner with the foolish cheating wife who got in the way of his work. Haven't seen this plot in LW before and it was great. I don't know how you keep coming up with these conversations, but please don't stop. You just keep getting better.

...when I get to overhear another conversation.

Very clever, and so much easier than a divorce.

Lol.

Keep them coming, I appreciate them.

I’d better keep an eye on the new cleaner my wife’s just engaged.

...For Technical Merit, anyway. I don't like murdering 'loving wives' or their buddies, but this was a departure from that juvenile sub-genre, so no deductions for that... this time.

Dialogue was good; the writer has, and uses, a spell checker--very good. He also remembers basic rules of grammar--again, good for him.

Imagination: not so good. Cliche driven story lines aren't that interesting, and the story began with many cliches--rich girl who marries down, hubby is Rambo in disguise, lover is enormous and super powerful ... etc., etc. But, to get to the cute plot twist, perhaps all the cliches were necessary.

What the heck? Give ol' SJ the benefit of the doubt this time. The submission is worth a 4.45 scoring, and I rounded up. '5' over all score. Congrats!

Sometimes you've just got to have some! ;-)

Thanks for this entertaining little flash. Clever and funny.

A great read for sure. Keep them coming 👍

"Wtf is going on With the loving wives section.. Absolutely shit stories by authors who used to be able to write and a profusion of murder porn mixed in with the normal cuck shit. The quality of writing has deteriorated massively. Really lazy efforts."

There are two considerations here. The first is that Anonymous seems to be out of sorts by the style of story Sleepery has gifted us with.

That just seems odd to me. I realize that my opinion isn't more valid than anyone else's, but I have absolutely no problem with a story that includes violence as long as it isn't snuff and it isn't a repetition of what the writer has written before. I want to see talented writers spread their wings. If SleeperyJim, who can write the hell out of a story, gifts us with tales of a man who walks away peacefully and lives a better life and another story of violent revenge and another story of reconciliation and so on; wonderful. I want authors that I admire to dip their toes in various styles of stories.

The second item that I find odd is the condemnation of what Anonymous believes to be lazy efforts. To a certain extent, there is the feeling that the appropriate response to a statement like that is "take your free entertainment and go away". If you've never contributed a story or edited a story, your opinion on whether or not someone who has contributed a story is lazy is worthless to me.

Very Original. Very Dark. Very Enjoyable. Write On!!! 5*

Well written, a very good setup and finish. I too am not into murder and mayhem, but it worked here.

And no mistake.

Very worth the read. *****

Stupid slut just couldn't resist drinking his expensive wine ;-)

Loved this one. Dark, but with humor to take the edge off. Great story.

a Brit killing a thug who was going to kill him. As to the poisoned whore, she killed herself. But it does beg the question, why didn't James Bond the Cleaner just allow the Big Cock of the Month guerrilla die from the same poison? Guess that wasn't as sexy as the hidden wrist spears?

Thanks for the fun.

Why does Hubby have a bottle of expensive wine in the house, loaded with an exotic poison?

That is NOT how he did in Daddy. Since he didn’t know exactly when he’d get home, they could

easily have been dead before he rolled in. His pre-Bull plan was to leave her fairly well off.

Also, someone in ‘the business’ would have known about Cecil ... can’t let things like that sneak

up on you! And don’t try to say Hubby already did ... his thoughts can’t lie to We-The-Readers!

Too many loose ends.

3*. and no one had to die ... Hubby coulda just left, as he had planned! Real Bulls drink beer!

I guess I just don't get it...

Two thumbs up!

Keep the conversations coming!

I gave it 5 for the laugh I had reading it.

Why bother with the blades if gorilla guy was poisoned.

Why have poison wine anyway.

Why such a story that was not as good as it could be.

Now this is more like it! A happy valentines for all, and to all, good bye - my kinda story

Smokepole

He had to use the blade because the poison had not taken effect at the time while he was being attacked.

Well done

I'm not a slash and kill kind of fan, but this was clever and a worthy 5* addition to your conversations series. Keep it going! There are more conversations to be had.

This was my second clue, the first was making a point of the bleach. Always have to have bleach even though it shows up under black light. Had no idea where it was going after that though. But I can see why the powers that be would not be pleased with somone in the UK selling things like Stingers to the bad guys. Why use the knife? You are kidding right? Should have been obvious to the most casual reader. The poison hadn't taken effect yet, he was just an "average" guy who was about to get his ass kicked, hence the self defense. And we in the South appreciate the nod to the Southern Belle. Well done little flash story. Signed: BTW

Yes, this was a dark story...But...you made it a fun read. Definitely not what I expected. Thank you for an enjoyable and entertaining story. (Now I have to go and read more of your stories.)

especially when the spoils are kept back. TK U MLJ LV NV

Unhappy

Nice!!!

I was going to say extreme revenge but it wasn't was it just a man doing a job. No love involved.

In my bathroom. Any chance you still have his number? Tell him to bring the acid, the mop, and a giant plunger.....

Nice job SJ. 5*.

I can't believe this is currently scoring higher than some of the others in this series. I suppose the BTB crowd is very active.

Another good one!

Really nice

This was good.

Maybe the cuck crowd forgot to down vote it. Busy trashing someone else's stories I presume.

LOL, good one

You have made cuckold wanters unhappy. You should be ashamed of yourself. He could have forgiven her

Another stupid, self-centered whore down the drain.😂

The question is, "What did you think of this story!" The answer is, I don't know. I do know there is no good guy in it. Or gal. But you did say it was dark. By the nature of his work, it's so far removed from the norm that it's impossible to identify with him. By her almost instantaneous betrayal of what she thought were her marriage vows, that to is not near okay so far removed from the norm, but still far enough that along with her contempt for the man she thought she'd natprried, it's impossible to identify with her, and Snake of course is Snake. Identifying with snakes is simply a non-starter. So I guess what I think about it is, it's fiction, and of a type that apart from capturing my interest for a time has nothing in it for me. And like a lot of fiction on the tube, I won't even remember it after awhile. I'll give it a 3 though. The writing wasn't bad. Just the story.

Freaking great story!!

Loved the twist, she died to quick

Moral of story: don't monkey with British intelligence services.

To the Anonymous who snarked that "he could have forgiven her"

He never didn't forgive her. It wasn't his choice that she drank the wine.

5 stars, excellent story. Thanks for posting.

Excellent, very well done, why do people always assume the little Mr average has no back history, like military service, giving him a skill set not glaringly obvious...

Loved it, like all these conversation stories

It is extremely foolish, and potentially VERY dangerous, to judge someone capabilities based on how they look.

There a LOT of former spec ops and black ops people [the latter from various 3 letter agencies] who would be less than gentle in resisting physical assault.

I have a "girlfriend" [a friend who is a girl] who is 35, looks like the girl next door ....and is so damned lethal if provoked. Other than SHE worked for one of those agencies should strike cautionary note for all of us. Treat each person kindly. Costs nothing and can do much good....and avoid a lot of grief.

Why was the wine poisoned? Hos contract was for the father. I missed something. But creative story nonetheless.

His wife is okay with him cheating? He was married? for several months.

Enjoyed this story very much. I don't look at these stories to be critical, read them for pleasure. Thank you 5 *****

To the .any commenters below, he had warned her NOT to drink the wine and she did it herself. I assume it was part of one or.more alternate or backup plans to assassinate her father.

I enjoyed the story but was hoping to see the lady to at least to survive. Maybe with memory loss.

Worth reading 5*****

Meh. Three stars for an uninspired story

JPB NOT BOB

Acid in a bathtub, Come ON! All that will do is make a mess, not dissolve two bodies, one of which is a very large man. Meh.

JPB NOT BOB

I'm reading all these 'Conversations' in alpha order, which, obviously, means I've done 15. I suppose 1 bad one out of 15 is not bad, but it's a major disappointment whilst reading that No. 15.

On to No. 16 and hoping for better. Or has the author passed his peak?