All Comments on 'Convincing Connie'

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Phoenix_LusterPhoenix_Lusterover 4 years ago

There should be a 4.5 star, because while I'm not totally in love with your story, I more than like it. A 'rather like' option would be perfect.

Well written, well thought out and well presented. The whole small whale thing was a detractor, I'm not really into that and her eager submissiveness nagged me just a wittle bit. That's more of a personal preference thing though.

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