All Comments on 'Cops & Hookers'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
brilliant

very good

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Sweet Hot

I loved it. I was a real story w/ a real plot and lovely sweet hot sex. MORE!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
great story

great story loved it

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
hot!!!!!!!!!!

omg i loved it, made me wet :P

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
please...

I want to hear more about these lovers! I want to hear how the world receives them, their future, their up, downs, and all the little things that make life life.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Read it, love it, and read it again.

Finally, a real romantic story of a couple that's not meant to be together, but are perfect for each other. And a touching, and very hot, and sweet love scene.

-abigail

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
WOW!

THIS STORY IS SEXY BUT SWEET AT THE SAME TIME! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
5 out of 5 stars and 2 thumbs way way way up!!!

I honestly LOVED the story. Just so captivating and riveting, and i have to admit better then any romance novel i've ever read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Amazing

A beautiful tale of love with a hot, sensual clinax...I loved it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
excellent

a great story. one of the best i have read here.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Great idea, poor execution

The idea is very nice, fancy and realistic at the same time, but the telling of the story doesn't convey any feeling. This is a positive kind of failure Imo.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Yumm

I loved it, yes please write more and continue this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Fine story, well written, and full of love

This is a beautiful story, about not being judgmental, and treasuring love wherever you find it. Keep it up! I hope you write more about these characters. I love them!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
nice

It was well written good job

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

I loved it!!! Its so amazing don't listen to people who hate it there crazy.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
not bad...

meh. its all right... I have read better... add a sequall

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

Very well written

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Yes!!

I love the storyline and build up. The ending was just as amazing as the beginning. You had me worried about Faih for a moment.

stormyeyedonestormyeyedoneover 6 years ago
Underrated

I love this story. Some stories are good as sec scenes in themselves, others are better as a story unto themselves. Though the sec may have been drawn out more, I thing going too far would have ruined the essence of the story- two women finding each other. Despite a few mistakes here and there, mostly punctuation, this was a superbly well written story. I enjoy plot lines and character buildup in a story. Fantastic job, and I seriously think the story is way underrated.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Good story!

Enjoyed the characters. I look forward to more of your writingskills. Cheers.

Bat3516Bat3516over 1 year ago

I think you should make a secound one where your story continues to see if they stay together or break up....

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