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Click hereI sat up and grabbed her, swung her around and placed her back in her own bed. She giggled a bit as I had caught her by surprise, but she invited me back inside by moving her legs apart. I gave her a kiss, before guiding my cock back inside of her. I started slowly, but the anticipation inside of me had me quicken the pace. I was in control now, and Emma let me do what I had to do. Her moaning got louder, still high pitched, as I increased the pace yet again. The tension inside of me was more intense, seeing Emma willingly laying on her back, her tits bouncing even more at every thrust I did inside of her.
"I... love you... dad," she said, between her moans.
"I love you too... princess," I said, grunting a bit as the tension inside me was approaching climax.
I leaned down and gave her a kiss. I could tell she was getting close because her breathing got even more intense. She could tell I was close too, and she gave me one last nod of acknowledgement.
"Together," she said.
I gave her the last deep thrusts I could, before reaching the point of no return. The walls inside her pussy started to contract as she reached her climax, making her even tighter which had me over the edge. One last thrust and I blew my load inside of her. I had numerous of sprouts inside of her, as she was almost digging her nails onto my back in her own climax.
I gave her a few last thrusts, as I collapsed next to her. Emma crawled over, laying halfway on top of me almost gasping for air. We were laying there for a while, as our breathing and pulse became controllable again. I heard Emma inhale deeply before letting out a long sigh.
"Thank you for the most perfect prom night ever," she said.
I kissed her forehead, as I was reminded on how it all started. That wonderful prom night idea sprawling in my head last Wednesday. I never imagined this, but it was indeed the perfect prom night.
Maybe working from home next week isn't going to be so bad after all. Sure, I had a lot of catching up to do, but I would be in self-isolation the next few weeks with my very special someone. Both ways.
- COMMENTS
FireFox59almost 4 years agoThe daughter sounds like a hott little piece of ass. Glad to see him eat her cherry before she rode him and popped it
Anonymousalmost 4 years agoI've enjoyed all of your stories so far,keep writing we need something to distract us during these crazy times.
Anonymousalmost 4 years agoThis is a good story with sensitivity and reasonable depth in the characters. Plot development is good for this type of story. If English is not your first language have confidence that you are doing better than any of us would do in your language. Your mastery of English is good overall. My compliments.
Ed
Scottish_Druidabout 4 years agoAs amateur writers, we are just that. Amateur. Do not sweat those who expect a Penguin Professional story that has had three or four editors scrub every line. Look at 50 shades, that tripe was horrible in grammar, thesis, and story yet still made millions.
Just write what you feel, fix obvious issues, let it sit for a few days and go back for a second read and fix. If you like what you see, publish. I get many 'complaints' about my writing, but if I use the USA forms, the Brits bitch. Likewise if I write as I was learnt to, USA plebes bitch. Screw em all, lad. Just write.
Cheers, SD
HeyyyHannahabout 4 years agoI see plenty of others have already harangued you over spelling & grammar, so I wont beat that any more, but it was really hard to stay focused on the story.
Besides that, I liked the general outline of the story, it was a good plot!
I definitely feel your stress about writing your first story.
I just wrote and submitted my first two stories here myself, yesterday and today.
"Cheers to the Leaders" and "End of Shift".
Keep an eye out for them!
Anonymousabout 4 years agoEnjoyed it, some minor errors, but an excellent story. Do continue to write!
SomeOddThoughtsabout 4 years agoAuthorEnglish is not my main language, and I did apologize for my grammatical mishaps.
I wrote this story in 4 hours, and corrected the quotes as per request when it was reviewed the first time.
I didn't see the other mistakes I made, and neither did Word catch them.
Sometimes when you stare on the same page for too long, you end up getting blinded by words, and even a sentence filled with so many mistakes, will quickly seem end up looking normal. At least to me.
I wish there was a way to correct these things, after the story was posted.
Either way, thank you for your comment.
Anonymousabout 4 years ago"She's mostly sitting in the couch..." Probably more convenient to sit ON the couch.
Also, you've already established the studying and working from home thing, so this* is just repetition: "I usually sit at the dining table with my laptop *working from home*, trying to keep up with stuff piling up."
And this next section pretty much abandons the English language altogether: "Anyway, I was sitting a Wednesday afternoon, overhearing my daughter talking with hey study group. They were doing some geography thing, but all spend the time, walking through Google Street View, exploring the world, but not really do something productive."
