All Comments on 'Coronavirus Confinement'

Story flowed pretty well. I did like to slow start and interaction with Todd and Dee. The whole family poker night was a good lead in to the sexy strip poker. Would have liked to see how the last two hands played out. Story had some grammatical errors. Perhaps a continuation and their return to the states.

Don’t know where this story can go from here but it could be a real challenge to see where or if it can go from here

Until the parents got included

Very good story, moved along quite well. A little more editing and revision would make it even better.

I would have logged in to review this but I could only enter 4 characters of the security code. I'll submit another bug report.

You keep writing and I will keep reading.

daytymer

I didn't expect the parents to become part of the story, but it was done well.

Thank you

Another good story. Keep writing

didn't need to involve the parents!

Now, originally I was going to give this a 10/10 for just this story of a family finding out their passion for each other in confinement and I would read a full book of this, but by the end of the second poker game, it got way too sex based and everybody father daughter, mother son, having sex (especially with Dee taking Ben's father over him even when his father was the most against the game at first) was so extremely like, I don't even know, like, some form of bad. I mean incest is fine on my terms, but FATHER DAUGHTER? NUH-FUCKIN-UH. And I'm very surprised when his father didn't stop doing oral Ben didn't like kick him in the balls and same thing when he told his wife to have sex with his son (I'm also surprised even with how hot his mom was he even did it) So just that scene alone knocks off 6 points to a 4/10 and a book I would never actually read. I'm dissapointed because this actually started off great as a mix between a little sex and a pretty good story.

Oh wow, what a wonderful story.

I hoped the parents wouln’t be part of the game, but now I’m happy they were.

You definitely can write and I can’t wait to read the next of your stories.

For not to be too ass kissing: I didn’t like the parent’s comment "We will not be grandparents to a child not born in the United States of America" as that doesn’t fit to them being described as tolerate, liberal and well educated university professors :)

Lost me when the parents got involved.

Not sure why ppl are complaining about the parents getting involved? The category is "Incest"-if they don't like incestuous relationships, why read stories in this category? I don't think I would ever fuck MY mother at that age, but I'll bet there's a LOT of fathers who would love to fuck their sexy daughter(s). The ONLY thing I wish he had kept out was the "tear in her eye" comment. It makes it look like she wasn't enjoying herself. And we all know she loved it. And I'll bet dad loved it too. The next chapter would be mom and daughter-SO hot!!!

I'm not into stories where parents are involved, but I really enjoyed this one.

I really enjoyed the kids going at it, that is normal sibling activity and very enjoyable I can imagine. I would have liked more adventures between them. The parents involvement was interesting and probably very liberating for all of them but my own experience is that the siblings should keep their activities secret like I did with my sister.

Great Story; would like to see a part two to this story. I think it would be great with the love and sex you have started with. 5/5

Enjoyed it until the parents joined... changed the whole dynamic and didn’t work for me, so I stopped at that point. 5* for the good part; 0 for the rest... 3*

bloody excellent, this MUST HAVE A SEQUEL please, it was rivetting!

of you to care about offending anyone with your story. You are very talented and I thank you for sharing.

Great interacting between the siblings. I did not care for inclusion of the parents. It changed everything. I wish the story was developed further with just the sibs.

I do enjoy these pandemic-themed stories!

But to focus on the most important part: right at the start you say that Zurich doesn't have any beaches. In fact, it does, because Switzerland is full of lakes, and Zurich sits at the end of one, with parks and sandy beaches along the side. It also has warm summers with pleasant water temperatures for bathing. You can swim and sun while looking out at the snow-peaked Alps—highly recommended!

The More You Know!

More please! The final rounds need to be played and everyone cums!

Make you think that Dee is the one running family game night and now it family game day

Thanks for a well written imaginative story!

I liked that the parents caved into accepting Ben and Dee as a couple, more or less. But I would have preferred that you chose a different route to get there. I really hated the family orgy. It totally ruined the story for me. 3/5

The idea is good, but it is poorly implemented.

The details are very poorly worked out.

Everything is chosen simply by the beauty and exoticism of the names.

About the places of residence: the author probably just pointed his finger at the globe, not even looked at the pictures on the Internet.

On the quarantine in Wuhan: nothing is written at all. And the situation there was very harsh. True, the results were better than in Europe or America.

Alcohol: a strange set and order of drinking. There is a culture and rules for drinking alcoholic beverages. Nothing has been implemented. Mescal and absinthe are not drunk like that. The drinks themselves do not look as described. No one drinks mescal (tequila) after absinthe. Especially not beer.

Sex: it's nice that the parents accepted the sibling bond. But even if they didn't have love, an orgy with the parents is clearly unnecessary.

Plus: the author at least knows where the hymen is.

I really enjoyed the story up until the time they played strip poker and ended up fucking each other. This story didn't need that. The interaction between brother & sister was going along very well. I've read another one of your stories, "The Wingman", which was spectacular, so I look forward to reading more of your work. This particular story just went way over the top for me.

Fantastic storey loved the family orgy. This storey should continue, dee and dad should spend the night together as should Ben & Mum. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Sorry, I have to agree with the other commentors. You lost me with the orgy. It was kind of interesting seeing the flirting between mom and Ben, but bringing Dad into the mix killed the vibe.

That being said, I like your writing style and will take the positive reviews of you other works from the comments and make my way to your page.

Trailer park trash family of whores!! Should have stuck to brother and sister!!

NOT WORTH READING

A well written story that I enjoyed reading, even if the ending was a little abrupt.

Son and Mom, Dad and Daughter, or Brother and Sister... Pick one and run with the story, but not the Family orgy... Call me " old fashioned" , but Sis turned into a cock slut really fast and I wouldn't have wanted to be following up my Dad's load of cum an hour later. 3 Stars

Loved the story and would love to see a sequel. Don’t listen to the haters, get wild with the next game night!