by HeyAll
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I really liked this. I actually found the plot more entertaining than the sex scene, which I prefer from my erotica. 5 stars
Wish you would have written more having Claire accept the role of CEO (PART 2 she regularly intended to have sex with her own son and daughter.) perhaps?. Enjoy your incest stories always an enjoyable read and thank you for writing.
Maybe get daddy in their as well once they are home and Claire is CEO.
Interesting story
This was a different I/T story of forced sex between family members but was a good read. Will the mother and children continue their new found fun ??!!
You usually get 5 stars from me.
This one only 4, it was too static, business like almost scientific, not erotic. I like the premise but the result was left wanting.
This is an enjoyable romp and a beginning of what might be a longer story. It appears to me that the mother and her children might want to carry this incestuous relationship further.
Good writing and editing but no way in a business sense.
Please continue this story as mom already knows that she wants to continue having sex with her children. Plus brother and sister need to fuck too. Daughter needs to eat brothers cum out of moms cunt.
I didn’t enjoy the story as much as I wanted to. There was a lack of passion, not just on the part of the characters but in the writing. I wanted more detailed descriptions of everyone. More inner thoughts, internal monologue. Also, given how often the pill was mentioned I was surprised that it wasn’t revealed to be a placebo at the end.
Would love to see a second chapter where they enjoyed it so much they continue long after.
The key to an interesting incest story is the context of how it began. Too many stories lack a plausible reason why a mother and her children would fuck each other. The corporate election and blackmail are novel premises. I wondered to what extent something like this already happens. Good story.
The story ended with the mother thinking of how she was going to continue to have sex with her children.
Unique twist for sure - makes me wonder if stuff like this happens. Would've liked a part two instead of the one sentence end. 5*
Great story HeyAll as usual. I know you don't write sequels. But it would be nice to have a short one when they do it voluntarily with out the help of pills.
Great story HeyAll as usual a sequel would round this story of better I feel? Well done all the same.
Having been aroused, it was a believable request. And possibly continuing as she thinks at the end is believable. But the premise of being a woman in charge desperate enough to act as Claire did strains credulity. She will not be in charge. She will need to do what she's told. She'll get the credit and the money, but she won't be in charge. And the pill producing instant arousal? The fantasy of Spanish fly! But, once you buy into the unbelievable premise, it easy to be seduced by the rest of the story. I rated it 5 stars because of the number of commenters that bought into the story. Thurber was definitely right when he said, " You can fool too many of the people too much of the time."
im no corporate mogul or mistress.. but I CAN relate to the pills and participants..since that snowed in weekend my girl brought extacy home from college and it was only her, me and her HS brother... oooh gawd it was long..debauched..delicious and delightful! i think we were all 3 predisposed (as i had had encounters with each of them seperately..) but im sure all 3 of us broke our orgasmic records..that time:)
Thank you. Perfect prose as usual. Possibly just a little more detail on the actual sex acts though . . . .