by cmike
Love the start of the story, great use of a little blackmail to open up a fantasy. I like that you kept the story simple and to the point using only characters that were necessary. Please write a second (and third, etc.) chapter to this.
The story starts out great. The ones where blackmail, especially relatively believable backgrounds can be very erotic. Well written, with a nice pace. This has great potential and I look forward to several chapters!
Great start, I cant wait to see how Pauline's interview goes. There is so much that I hope you do with this story! Please hurry up and write part two!
What a fantastic story. I have dreamed of this for myself so many times.
Love the story but Pauline needs to be already wearing Panties under her suit & Tie while at work.