All Comments on 'Corporate Policy'

by cmike

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
love the start

Love the start of the story, great use of a little blackmail to open up a fantasy. I like that you kept the story simple and to the point using only characters that were necessary. Please write a second (and third, etc.) chapter to this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Love the storyline

The story starts out great. The ones where blackmail, especially relatively believable backgrounds can be very erotic. Well written, with a nice pace. This has great potential and I look forward to several chapters!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
More Please!

I can't wait for more. Thanks for the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Great start, totally Hot!

Great start, I cant wait to see how Pauline's interview goes. There is so much that I hope you do with this story! Please hurry up and write part two!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
I have dreamed

What a fantastic story. I have dreamed of this for myself so many times.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Pauline Needs to Learn to Please

Love the story but Pauline needs to be already wearing Panties under her suit & Tie while at work.

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