All Comments on 'Correcting Annette'

Direct, effective, and very sensitive … I loved it from the opening to the close!

I really found thic story very exciting and look forward to more chapters.

Marquis de Sade himself couldn't have done better. I don't normally read spanking stories, but this one certainly will make me think twice about that in the future. Great build-up and you really manage to capture the secret, seductive pleasure of the moment.

You have expertly provided a true example of well written erotica.

While not a regular reader of discipline stories, I have always preferred to cherish rather than punish. I found this story exciting, well written and extremely arousing. Congratulations.

First class story and very, very sexy. I'd love to read more of your adventures with Annette.

What a wonderful arousing story. With each Thwack I got harder and the arousal was first class and I was almost breathless! Thanks.

Please more of their adventures? Perhaps meeting Annette's friends. Or James' friends? Someone from the discipline magazine, perhaps his editor? A family member?

Enjoyed this story tremendously. Please write more!! Would love to explore the scent and the two personalities. Annette's aloofness and Anna-Marie's desires are a wonderful stage for so much more of your beautiful style. Please write more!

I think this is a great story. Makes one feel as if this should be their story.

But can we please also have some anal punishment / teasing?

This is one of the hottest caning stories on literotica for sure. I read it a while ago but didn't bookmark it. Now I was happy to rediscover it and I must say that reading it a second time after a while was just as hot as the first time

By this example of erotic writing, you have set the bar so high that any other author attempting to write hot, authentic, pain/pleasure literature must study your example.

Detail, timing, plotting, denoument are exquisite. The Shakespeare of orgasmic prose?? Thank you for an unmatched erotic journey of the sexual imagination.

BTW: You owe me for a stained pair of VS silk boy shorts.

Oh; does Amazon.com sell canes? :)

Best of luck in any future writing endeavor.

"RaunchyCathy"

Beautifully written and extremely erotic. Well worth the time to read. Just the right length. Continue with more exploration of this typr of relationship

Beautifully written w/out a lot of "profanity" type words, which usually turn me off as a reader. PLEASE continue..!

Incredibly well written! Would love to see more!

I loved the way it started so innocently then slowly grew to a fevered pitch. They both were good artists and people in need , discovering the sensuousness of the human body. But Annette who knew James' secret was glad to introduce her own secret identity where they could share passions of art, desire, and something a little darker.

From art immitating life to life immitating art. A very powerful and intense story,

One I enjoyed reading and will remember as a favorite. I highly recommend it especially to those who share a power exchange.

That was amazing. Beautifully done! Please write more, please...

Expertly presented! It is great to read a skilled author. So many, including me, would love to write as skillfully as you. I will keep on writing till I master the written word.

Thanks for a great story, beowul4

like the slow seduction, build up to her real desires. part 2 where she brings a friend?

Not the genre I typically read, but I've enjoyed all your other submissions so far and thought I would check it out.

I was not disappointed!

And yes, please do continue the story ;->