All Comments on 'Corrine Loses Her "V" Card'

I stopped reading when the guy finds his cousin's (or substitute sister's or mother's or aunt's) bra and panties and jerks off with them. Done and done and done again. Originality is what seperatres the good writers from the alsorans.

Your story-telling skills are good, but your writing skills are not as good. Get a little help and you will become a fine writer.

Creepy perverted lame.

Two turn offs. Shaved pussy is for the WIMPS of today. Not Cumming in the pussy...

Pretty standard incest jerk off story! That's not necessarily a bad thing, it's a good place to start. Work on making it more original, try to avoid the common cliches you see all the time on here or avoid too many of them. If you have to use them, use them well!

Truly the best “V” Card love making.

Truly love and Tenderness.

I hope you continue the relationship between Corrine and her cousin.

It was the BEST

I will read it again.

What happened to her hyphen?

Loved every page A beautiful love story.

Didn’t Heather get fucked?

I plan to read again.

Definitely one of my favorite stories.

I hope you continue the series.

You did a great job with the plot and the characters, and the storytelling was spot on. I for one would love to read more of these characters. I thought the concept of the two friends pushing the cousins to do exactly what they wished they could but were afraid to do themselves was a neat twist.

OK critics- the spelling and grammar wasn't perfect, but it was better than 99% of the stories on this site.

Five stars and favorite story for me.

Well written, good build up. I would like to hear more, another tale with all 4 participating more fully.

Sweet home Alabama

Why were her friends okay with her fucking her cousin?

Great storyline and build up and you MUST continue on and make this a true love story with him and his cousin. Does he marry her, she only a cousin, you haven’t said if she first, second or distant cousin. Does he take her back with him. There’s sooo many directions you can go with this story. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️