by Egglime
This is an amazing story on its own and even better as the start of what promises to be an intriguing series. Well done
This story is off to a GREAT start. I read can’t wait to read more. Please don’t make us wait too long!!! Love corruption themes!
Incredibly well-written with excellent word choice and descriptions. The plot is different and has a long lead ., which clarifies the depth of the characters, and results in a fantastic, cdawn out, and unique sex scene The establishment of the rules of the relationship between Ellison and Max is a good ploy to use as an entry into the next chapter. Max getting her dream job is probably because of Ellison and adds intrigue to the continuing story.