All Comments on 'Corruption Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Intriguing

This story is shaping up to be interesting. Your writing skills are evident and I am enjoying getting to know the characters. Keep the chapers coming, please.

FaithWhiteFaithWhiteover 9 years ago
Please continue

Still write well. I can't find fault with anything which is a very good thing trust me given some of the things that are written on this website.

You have an interesting storyline and I am curious to see where you take it. Of course this does sound a little like an episode of Supernatural but I'll ignore that for now.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Good Job

A very interesting read.

Patience is a nice character, I hope she is corrupted by the demon.

After all that's the kind of thing I hoped to read I saw the title of your story.

Or is it false advertising? ;-)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
So...

Will you finish this story?

Will Cadence be corrupted? (I hope so)

Just know you've still got readers waiting for more.

Love your work btw.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Nice depth

Liking the characters here.

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