by LoveMenLoveSex
This story is shaping up to be interesting. Your writing skills are evident and I am enjoying getting to know the characters. Keep the chapers coming, please.
Still write well. I can't find fault with anything which is a very good thing trust me given some of the things that are written on this website.
You have an interesting storyline and I am curious to see where you take it. Of course this does sound a little like an episode of Supernatural but I'll ignore that for now.
A very interesting read.
Patience is a nice character, I hope she is corrupted by the demon.
After all that's the kind of thing I hoped to read I saw the title of your story.
Or is it false advertising? ;-)
Will you finish this story?
Will Cadence be corrupted? (I hope so)
Just know you've still got readers waiting for more.
Love your work btw.