by jill999
stories about the future (2219) belong in the sci-fi/fantasy area no where else
DBRS
I liked the way you set up the main storie. I only hope that there are going to be more chapters. Looking forward to reading the next set and thank you for the great start.
This is the most original story I have ever read on here. I absolutely loved the story line. I cant wait to hear more. Im hoping that the mother set it up to be "LI" PLEASE continue this story!!! I can also tell this was edited very well. Its a nice change to not have to do the editing in my head. I did find one spelling error but it wasnt enough to distract from this absolutely awesome story. MUCH THX