by _
the whole family was going to the party me and my brother did`n want to go as we had to dress in funny costume I did not wear any panty in the party my brother came up behind me he said this party sucks I agree so lets go get some fun I took his hand and put it on my bum in the dim light we found a chair he sat down open his fly cock out I sat on his lap and fuck him I must have come at lease 3 times after the party mum and ask if we enjoy the party we both said it was the best party ever my broth is now my fuck buddy when i not on a date we fuck
Could there be any more Anonymous comments here? Read this a long time ago and loved it. The way you described the awkwardness and eroticism of being jammed together like that made the story.
I could totally imagine doing this to my girlfriend, not my sister thou.
Shit. You obviously manipulated the reviews, which is really pathetic beyond words.
No one noticed two people in one costume? I doubt that's achievable which detracts forum the rest of the story. I also laughed when she came without any penetration, clitoral stimulation or anything. Oh we'll at least it didn't take long to read.
Jeeeszz, that was defuckinglicious. One of the best visuals of an oooh so so story; it is just beautiful, and exotic, and thrilling and Sister is so damned nonchalant about the whole affair--taking off her underwear, potty break crushed up naked with her brother and then fucking--it's blissfully cute! Cute? Exactly, cute and charming!
But, it was so damned easy to imagine myself walking around in that suit naked with my sister playing rub-a-dub-dub on my pole-vault. Thrilling! It was over too, too damned soon!!!
I expected them to walk around the party in the costume together, with him inside her
I think I read this once and didn't care for it. That changed this time around.
Please write more stories like this...maybe some with horny mom/sis and reluctant son/brother.....your story made me soooo wet
Wow!! that was hot!! Had sex with my sister after we were both grown and was it ever the sweetest forbidden fruit you can taste. I'll write about it some time.
Way to go, keep writing.
loved the story bit to short hope theres more to cum. i love brother sister sex thanks
fantastic story!! But you should keep it going, make more chapters, say what happened on the way home and when they got home, keep it going!!! :D
almost came, which for me is very dificult ;)
loved it... when is sequel coming...
Also anyone knows of incest with dad (daughter wearing a backless nun's costume)
Dude, I thought that it would be hotter if he just slid into her from behind while they're in the middle of the party. Just saying...super hoot.
thanks, short and sexy and fun,,,really liked it!
love good raunch!!
Great story, short but good. Made me so hot, I had to go take a shower
I was truly expecting something much more kinky like him walking around in the costume with her while fucking her or something... another meh story ending up with sex and an abrupt ending that leaves one to their own imagination... aka a bit cliche. Still good room here for something more kinky.
I remember asking my brother to go to party were we all dressed up. It was a horse and I was in the front and he was behind me. We both got naked and I got in and he followed. We were no sooner zipped up when he came deep in my fertile cunt. By the time we got next door he had come in me four times. It really felt nice having his cum in me and running down between my legs as we walked. No one guessed who we were and when we sat down I felt him bottom out in my cunt. It felt as though my cervix was opening up to let him go deep in me. I wound up pregnant from that party and I have gotten pregnant seven more times by my brother.
Loved the idea; never had a sister, and never got invited to a party like that.
It was short, but it got the job done. Very intense. Hope to hear more about other encounters they had :)
Its not generic and it made me laugh a few times, good times.
That story was really hot! I felt I was there, in the suit, behind her. Nice writing. Keep it, umm, up!
Excellent story. I liked the setting and idea of the over sized costume. Hope there's more with this one :)
to the person who said "what crap" about this... you're the crappy one. i mean really, it's one thing to give constructive criticism, quite another to be a blatant asshole.<BR>
and seriously... if you don't like the "wham-bam-thank-you-ma'am" kind, do us all a favor and scroll down to do a length check then move on to a story that draws on forever, whereby assholes with no life like you can get their rocks off and hopefully lighten up a bit in the process.<BR>
i cum quickly and i happen to like the ones that don't dick around and overdo the plot with unnecessary flourish.<BR><BR>
_, as usual you've done a brilliant job and i hope to see loads more of your work in the future. many thanks and keep up the brilliance babe!<BR>
5/5, 100/100 ;)
a turn off for me--However I did like the plot
that was an amazing sex story that deserves props! would love to have a sister like that and would love to no what happened on the way home!
I cannot believe how good you are. You must be writing from experience to be so on target. Need a second, third, or maybe even a fourth part to this one, or most all of your stories.
Rjay
This is an excellent start -worthy of a sequel. Thank you for being innovative, believable and erotic!
I think this story is rather original. The tiger suit made it pretty interesting. However, you need a better storyline.
Poor story line. Needs fleshing out I hate 'wam bam thank you mam' stories. Give it some body
Amazing story, one of the most original, if not the most original story I have ever read in this site. Continue writing this great story and maybe a continuation of the story wouldn't hurt.
DAMN! I almost came while reading this story!
My dick is rock hard! Can I borrow your sister?
Definitely got me wet.... Good story. Wished I could be in there with her....
Very hot, very erotic, sex in a tiger suit. Quite the imagination.
You have a good handle on what you're doing, and you like the brother sister incest, like me: roticwizard. Though I can't make them work nearly as well as you; you've got a good handle on them.
Keep making them good.
If there were more stories like this, I would never leave this site!
The story is much more original than many others I've read here - things like the tiger suit, the wacky idea to walk around in it, a costume party, an intense vegetarian with a naughty streak - and they work so well because they are imaginable, i.e. we think "hey, this could happen" (at least enough.)
You could work on some of your specific descriptions, i.e. "and it got me really excited" gets a bit boring. Perhaps something like "and I broke out in sweat- it was so hot," or "and the friction (or rubbing) got me hard in a second."
Well done with the ideas, though. I really enjoyed it.
i have enjoyed all of your stories that i have read, but this one is definately my favorite. keep up the good work
you will denfinetly have to make a sequel to this...maybe they go to another party together again or something but damn it was hot
one of the hottest thing s ever had my dick hard n seconds keep rightin more
This is some very good writing and it was enjoyable. You should continue this piece.
This story is really hot, and original. I would love to read what happens next on the walk home!!