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Re Anon's comment wondering about a kind of similar story involving a dragon costume: see https://literotica.com/s/accidents-happen-1 on here.
You're welcome.
After 20-plus years, I doubt the author will write a follow-up story.
this needs to be expanded, the walk of ages and or the rock of ages.....how long does it take to make it home in one piece.. lol
What a great story!
The concept is a bit ridiculous, but goddamn that sounds like fun!!!!
I know everyone avoids embarrassing themselves when leaving comments, by clicking on the authors name (in this case no name only an underlined space). Take this author's last post dated 05/10/07. The rest are dated on 02 & 03. So with a single exception all of the stories are 20 &21 years old. You'd have to be very, very dense to leave a comment for abandoned works.
Keep up the story! What happens on the way home? What happens when they get
there? and what happens in their future? 5 *'s
What a great story about siblings finding each other. Only let down is that it ends so short of their adventure going home or the fact they could have fooled around more at the party before heading home, A second chapter would have brought it nicely together. 👍
It's massively disappointing that we don't get to read about their journey home and all the juicy fucking they will do- I wish it didn't end so soon. Please, give us a part two!
Talk about a cliffhanger. And here I thought there was going to be a part two. Anyway, not bad. Keep it up.
This is a more ‘fleshed-out’ version of -‘s single page story. But -‘s version preceded this by a number of years. For what it’s worth I just enjoy reading them.
I remember reading an oh so familiar version of this story where the sister convinces her brother to be the back half of a dragon costume, and they find themselves getting hot and bothered walking around the party in the hot costume and things progress to him walking around the party imbedded in his sister, and they manage to get to a back room to finish(?) Am I wrong, or does anyone else remember this different version?
@Irishmike73 Can you give me the titles of some of the "realistic" stories you're talking about? I'm having a difficult time finding incest stories that reflect reality. I understand this is an erotic site, so I don't begrudge the writers who craft well written fantasies. Still, I'd very much like to read stories that are more truthful regarding incest, and I'm having a hard time finding them. Who knows when, or IF you'll read this comment, but if possible I'd appreciate your feedback on the matter.
This whole scenario is dumb and wouldn't work in any reality whatsoever I'm giving you one star only because the writing was good the storytelling sucks.
I liked it. It was believable enough to be true and that's what makes a good story.
This is certainly a new set of circumstances that could lead to sibling sex, but not really believable. Can't argue with the sex but maybe this should have been in the humor section.
One of my favourite fantasies. It has always intrigued me as I don't have any siblings so never got the opportunity to see them naked in my childhood or have any 'fun'.
A poorly written story key to writing a good fantasy story is 1 focus on making the characters believable and releastic 2 show what you are writing about in the narrative that is detail basically write on how it came about in detail and why it came about 3 there must be some type of conflict within the characters rather it's inner conflict that infects the character or characters emotionally basically there feelings a small scale conflict that is between the both characters if it's a short story no more than 5-6 pages per chapter if you are going to make it a short type book series you need a central conflict something that ties it all together also about the characters they need to be complexed but relatable something/someone your readers can follow just let it flow don't try to write about something you have no experience in cause then you just make it sound forced and rushed a good example on here look up lust at first sight book 1 and read those chapters and stories
This is a cute little story with a young brother and sister who have a promising future ahead of them. You really set them up for a repeat performance when the two get home (and alone in private.) But I can't believe that two siblings that fell so easily into an intimate relationship wouldn't move on to do their parents too! Anyway, thanx for the Read!
Fun story. In response to a comment below, whether this is an old story or not makes no difference. Hemingway's been dead for quite a while, but people still leave comments about his work on Goodreads.
While I believe that the authors on this site should get comments and deserve their votes. If anyone had clicked on the "22 stories" below the name, to see all of the stories written by this author. You would realize that all 22 were written in 2002 through 2003. While i appreciate you're wanting to leave commentary and vote. There's really not much point in this case.
Great short story... Too bad there ain't a part 2... Would of loved to hear about the walk home... Then part 3, could be of them fucking all night long... Part 4, could be them exploring other areas to fuck.... Just a suggestion... Also, body descriptions would be nice too...
Looked up this story that I have saved, just to leave a comment. This story has stuck with me for years. The sharing a costume, the openness and trust save comfortableness wearing her underwear with him in there, so hot!
To bigpickle
It works
Tell your sister too sit on the counter
Stand in front of her, enter her, let her wrap her legs around you.
Then let her tits touch your chest.
Try not to cum in her, unless she is on the pill.
A beautifully written and developed story of young siblings first-time sex.
I loved this story...While you kept the writing focused sharply on the eroticism, you did not rush for the predictable finish. This added to the realism quite a bit. This was unplanned, daring, and one thing definitely lead to another. I also loved how you left this open for the reader to imagine the further adventures of... Thank you for this nice little piece of writing.
Enjoyed your story, but would like to have been able to read its continuation, as the brother and sister made their way home, and the fuckerd their way into the night without the costumes or parents in the way. Thanx for the read.
My sister and I went to an erotic costume party. She was a big pussy and I was a big cock. For about two hours we wandered around the house acting like I was fucking the big pussy and every one laughed. After everyone saw our skit the thrill was over . We had zippers in our respective costumes so we could pee. We had this discussion and had an Idea. Everyone was pretty hammered and we went to where the biggest group was , we grabbed a chair, We both unzipped the our pee holes and she sat on my lap and I entered my hard dick into her wet excited pussy. She kept bouncing up and down . Every one was laughing. I felt her pussy twitching and she stopped bouncing. This caused me to cum at the same time she was climaxing. We both screamed out loud with pleasure . Everyone thought it was part of the skit and laughed hysterically and we did as well.
A sweet , incest. The only thing I had a problem with is trying to visualize the action of him being deeply inside of her, with her legs tightly wrapped around him and him feeling her chest against his. I played this scene over and over in my mind.. I had my older sister read it to see if maybe I was reading it wrong. She thought the same thing as I did. We slid out of our clothes and she took a position on the sink, We were excited to try and prove this right or wrong. Every time we tried to put our chests together , my cock slipped out of her pussy, so unless they both were double jointed, I am sorry , but I don't think that was possible.
What was the point of the costume? It played pretty much no part of the story. No build up. They just fucked in the bathroom.
...I assumed that the siblings would engage in sex while their costumes made them unaware of each other's identity,though they would continue after they learned.That they were wearing costumes doesn't really add much to the plot as is.
reading your story got me so hard and excited the pre cun was flowing need part two
Really would like a follow up story for most of your 1 page stories. Especially this one
You should check your facts before making a libellous statement about this stories author. The story you claim this story plagiarises is "Accidents Happen" by stewartlinda submitted 12/12/09. That was over seven years after this story which was submitted 11/04/02. No wonder you choose to remain an anonymous troll.
I've read it several times. It never seems to get old. I like this story and wish you would write another one.
Beautiful SISTER and BROTHER story.
3rd time I read it and each time was still exciting.
How about another chapter.
Beautiful love and tender affection between siblings.
I really love your style, I wished that you would still write stories...
@kelsweet. I'm not sure if your remark about date tags was a serious comment you were making, or if you were just being sarcastic about someone else's comment. Either way, every story in this author's library (and every other author's as well) has a submission date. This story was submitted November 4th 2002.
With respect to your last statement, I think you might need to read a few more stories. There are tons of stories here where the characters are kicked out of their homes, shunned by family and friends, and face a multitude of social and legal problems. However, the number of stories with that level of realism is pretty low compared to the rest of the stories with "happily ever after" type endings
There's at least one other, maybe a couple other stories on here that follow the same theme. Both have their strengths, but I'm curious which came first. Someone said this was "one of the first stories on Literotica. There's no date tag for any of the submissions?
Next "Rightbank" asked:
"and, inside a closed costume, why was he wearing a mask?
'The mask was a little bit of a tight fit, and my face ended up in her hair'"
"the mask" is the giant tiger head. He's saying it was a tough fit to get both heads into the same mask (if "mask" is the word). Indeed, the mechanics of all these costumes makes no sense, but that is the beauty of fiction....who cares if it's not physically possible, it's a good excuse for some hot action. Some of the best fantasies are those that have something totally impossible or nonsensical in them. I haven't read a single story here yet that ended up with a ruined family relationship or social ostracism, legal trouble, psychological trauma, or any of the other things that so often come with relationships like this in real life.
Nice not to have the 18" dick between the 48GGG tits. And rubbing one out between her ass cheeks was great.
The thing made me want to fuck someone so bad. I cumed 5 times. I kept janking on my dick as the story went along. Anyone want to get i a costume with me and fuck each others brains out. I am really horny right now. I need some porn to make my dick go soft or go hard again
This is one of the first incest stories I remember reading on here, so I thought I'd look it up. Still. So. Fucking. Hot.
This was awesome, kept the anticipation just right. Nice easy way to keep juicy things flowing.
....but what happened on the way and then once they got home ?
This story isn't finished, is it !
same idea of costume sex but diffrent hole to fuck...MMMMN but both are awsome storries.......just this one I feel should continue......it has awsome potentials
Was rereading this one for fun, when I got close to the end I came across this bit:
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She held me tightly against her, milking me with her pussy to intensify my pleasure. I fell forward, holding her body beneath me. Her legs were locked tightly around my waist. I felt her breasts crushed against my chest, and her hands roamed up and down my back. She whispered into my ear, encouraging me as I came. I gave her all I had, and we both stayed locked together, completely spent.
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I've got to say that coming up on an orgasm, going through it then coming down while your girl treats you like that is fucking awesome! Absolutely the best! Of course her squeezing you with her pussy is a given plus, but having her wrap her arms and legs around you and holding you tight while your brain is exploding just makes it ten times better! All that extra pressure and skin contact just amplifies it so much! So guys, ask your girls to do all of that, girls take notes (and come over when my wife goes to work, we can play daddy/daughter brother/sister! hehehe;)
great story, but too short, you need to follow up with this one and yes it is similar to another story here on Literotica...... but go for it..... come on
I READ THE ORIGINAL AND BETTER STORY A COUPLE OF YEARS BACK...ONLY THE SISTER WAS WEARING A DRAGON SUIT (she never took off her underwear)
, THEY STAGGERED AROUND THE PARTY GETTING SLICKER AND SLICKER FROM THE HEAT OF THEM BOTH....AFTER A TIME THEIR UNDERS SAGGED FROM SWEAT ,FINALLY SLIPPING INTO HIS SISTER (without permission) OUT AMONG THE PARTY.... WITH EVERY STEP THE GOT CLOSER TO THE CONCLUSION....THAT WAS A SMOKIN STORY ...NOT SOME LUKE WARM HALF ASS RIP OFF......
this is it
"Party,
I remember asking my brother to go to party were we all dressed up. It was a horse and I was in the front and he was behind me. We both got naked and I got in and he followed. We were no sooner zipped up when he came deep in my fertile cunt. By the time we got next door he had come in me four times. It really felt nice having his cum in me and running down between my legs as we walked. No one guessed who we were and when we sat down I felt him bottom out in my cunt. It felt as though my cervix was opening up to let him go deep in me. I wound up pregnant from that party and I have gotten pregnant seven more times by my brother.?
ROFL OK... why do people comment stuff like this lol
I went to a costume party, I was at my sisters place, her husband of 2 years was a real dick, always out with the boys. He wouldn't go with her, she chose a donkey outfit, she was the front, I was the back. We put it on in the car park, I played around a bit, pushing against her. I heard her laugh, it was such fun, The suit meant we were both standing, weird shaped donkey. I held her around her waist, I got hard, she could feel it and without even hinting said we better do something about that now, she pulled her shorts down, come on, I pulled mine down, she leaned against the car, I had never fucked my sister before but it felt so natural as my cock slid into her wet pussy and it wasn't long before my cum shot into her. Mm, in we went, it was hot in the suit, my cock never really went down, she told me to sit, which was awkward but she made it easy by sitting down on my cock, moving around. We went home, undressing in the car park, she sat quietly until we got to her house. He wasn't home, she dragged me into my bedroom and got on her knees and said give it to me , and I did and to my delight my sister orgasmed over my cock as I gave her my second load of the night. It was never mentioned again.
Her body is so tight, her tits are so firm. They haven't had time to sag because they were only a few years old. I think she wears so little around the house because she likes to get me horny. She always smiles at me when she notices I have an erection. I like it too because it makes her nipples hard.
so hot and very interesting i want sex in a costume!
Really well written story. Really something one could get off to :-)
I've read a few costume sex stories, not sure if this one borrows from another or another borrows from this one. Theres a two headed monster one with brother and sister in the costume, heads sticking out with makeup on that is really, really, really good!
Enjoyed this one, my only complaint is that the story had him fucking her right after he just came. Dude needs a little recovery time! Guess we expected him to be fucking her while they walked, but she is prolly too short for that ;)
but a couple of logistical questions are nagging at me.
If she couldn't zip the costume alone, how could he?
"She tried to reach her back to unzip the costume, but she couldn't stretch that far.
"You'll have to unzip me, I couldn't get it on by myself either."
and, inside a closed costume, why was he wearing a mask?
"The mask was a little bit of a tight fit, and my face ended up in her hair"
The only improvement would be if they had done more than just dry hump inside the tiger suit. Being zipped up together under such close quarters, just think of the possibilities. With a title like "Costume Sex," that's frankly what I would have expected.
OH MY FUCK that was soooooooooooo fucking hot, have you got more costume sex stories, i hope so
that was great for a short story,,and yes the scenario would be a possibility hence making the story that much more real..
as I did.
they actually stopped and made it physically credible after the incidental contact had turned them on. the eroticism of the two of them juxtaposed in the costume made it even more fun.
Ive read several costume sex stories on here of varying types. Two, at least, were both in the same suit, gotta love it! This one was nice and short, even if the brother was almost a pussy (barely a save, lol) ..um um i didnt mean to, uh, it wasnt you! Could he look any more stupid or insult her more? Lol! Then she's shoving his dick in and hes like, 'are you sure?' Of course shes sure numbnuts! Rofl! Still a fun story!
Good story but the turning around back and forth and taking underwear off without getting your legs out of the costume was a stumbling point.