by taking_you_deeper
welcome fellow lurker. i don't have the talent nor the patience to write here. i have enjoyed the stories here for a long time and can spot one that is entertaining and will get even better as it develops and grows. i can't wait for the next chapter
A very lovely start, though a bit quick, and I had a brief feeling that you were going to skip a few years at the end. Then you brought it back to the next day... I would hope that you would not skip Wendy's beginning, as it sets the tone for the continuing story. Thank you for sharing this with us!
Only quibble is they need to be longer. This was barely more than a tease. Still, your writing is great, so please do keep developing the series.
Please most definitely continueππππππππππ love the idea magic and costumesππππππππππ
way to short for such a wonderful beginning ... you have a lot of potential as a seductive writer, keep up the good work!
Please don't stop writing.
It is a wonderful beginning to hopefully, dozens of chapters as we read about the gradual transformation of a small town in North Carolina
That was a sexy and intriguing first chapter. I'm looking forward to more chapters. Thank you for sharing your art with us,
Wow, this one started off good and just got better. Starting the next chapter now...