by xcoyote21
you HAVE to keep going, now that Aimee knows what just happened. Maybe you can have the son tell her about the first time too and maybe find out what happened at the end of the first story with the husband. PLEASE continue!
Waiting for the next chapter
The pace of the story can be slightly slower though.
continue to tell us more...but get dave into the action..with josh and he tag teaming aimee..and for women/moms like myself...get aimee to get dave/josh into some really hottt bi action together with her becoming their total cumslut mom/wife...that scenerio is major turn-on for us..and would be definetly for aimee too...as well as josh/dave...
If you do a follow-up I can see the next story him confessing it wasn't the first time he fucked her. Just a suggestion.
pls keep writing and tell us more about aimee and josh.. aimee now found out it was her son.. so what's the next exciting thing???
I hate cliffhangers. The Mom obviously enjoyed it until the interuption that told her she was not with her Husband. Besides yealling 'Oh my God, Josh!' what was her reaction. Did she like it enough to contiue? Was she so pissed that she sent him to his room? Did she get pissed but after a little talk with Josh her heart melted?
Come on you got to tell us more of the aftermath besides her yelling "Oh my God, Josh".
Please, you just need to write another part of this story.
It's one of my favourites. I love it
she didnt care whos cock it was she liked it,when she calmed down they fucked all night,till dad got home
garbage. it sounds like it was written by a virgin trying to sound as if he knows what he is doing.
About as juvenile as you can get. I'm guessing Dad comes home, finds out what happened and kicks Joshes ass.
One of my favorites but I want to hear more about what happens next and if his sister joins in.
This story really needs a good finish. Aimee needs to figure out what really happened at the party ( it's not like she can fuss too much, since she was willing to fuck her daughter, fucking her son isn't much of a stretch), maybe even get everyone together for another round. Think about it.
This was a fun enough romp though, as a previous reader pointed out, a bit juvenile, which means you are required to take a pretty big leap of faith. Like most stories, the dialog needs some work. For example, Mom begins practically every sentence with her husband's name, even in the throes of orgasm! And then there is my personal fave, "WHOO HOO!". Glad to see that our 18 yr old, presumably inexperienced son is devoid of any nervousness, fear or trepidation at using his Mom like any other porn slag. Finally, Frederick's doesn't make any silk lingerie. The devil is in the details.
Not the most original story,
Did not like abrupt ending. She have gone on with mom's reaction.
Both stories are very hot, my only criticism is the story ends too abruptly.
What happened next?
What did Mom say, was she angry? Did she talk about how wrong incest was?
Did Josh point out that he knew she was ok with incest because she had sex with her daughter?
Did he admit to fucking them both at the party?
What happened when the father sobered up after the party?
what happened with the Nurse?
There are too many questions,
Story ended to soon ... shoulh have had more of what happened later ... did Mother and Son continue to enjoy their evening or did Mother freak out and run away???
Did like it up to that point ....
...if the author hadn't left us hanging for the past several years.
It was getting real good mother getting fucked by her son.i did it with my mom she end up getting pregnant with my kid in her.told her your moving in with me so i could fuck her.we have 3kids together.i told he quit shaving your cunt hair told i like natural.there was even one day my aunt came over to see my mom and i was there walked in said to them looks like a 3 way.my mom told my aunt the reason why your here is that your nephew is going to fuck you and breed you with his kid.my aunt said niway thats when my mom grab her and my mom ripped tube top outfirt off her she was naked.i was holding told my mom take my shorts off rhen picked up put her on the bed got on top rammed my cock in her cunt started fucking her mom told fuck her cunt good and hard i started pounding into her and she was screaming no.said mom i am starting to cum in her and my aunt said no then she felt start my cum good inside her cunt.once i was done mom and i put bite marks and hickies on her tits and neck mim told her sister you belong to my son no one else.aunt saaid my marriage mom said what about it your moving in gere and giving him 3 more kids which she did.now mom and her do gangbangs together every week letting 12to20 guys fuck them bareback
Barely. Cum in pussy is where it belongs. What would have been better is Mom and Sis fucked him, then Sis say after done, I'm not on the pill and will need to go after the mo0rning after pill. Then have Mom say nothing to worry about Dad had a vasectomy after Josh was born. !!! Breed them both!
You need to continue this storyline...he can reveal to her that it was HIM that fucked her and his sister at the hotel as Zorro, she can tell her daughter about everything and they can have another 3-way but sober this time. He can do his sister and/or mom at will...possibly even Dad can join in at some point, etc. Please make this storyline happen.
Here's the scene. The story leading up to this one was pretty good. The downside for this one is that it uses a lot of the same phrases AND descriptions of the previous one.