by AltheaRose
I loved it. 5 star effort. Looking forward to more.
A terrific story with very believable characters. Great sexual anticipation throughout. I felt like I was there watching it all unfold. Hope you do more with these characters.
I think we all anticipated a great second chapter, but this one exceeds my expectations. I laughed out loud when Dede talked about Cody bringing a note from his mother. That captured her anxiety so well.
I feel as if I've known these characters my whole life. Great job. Would I want a chapter three? No more than I want an ice cream cone on a hot summer day.
Thanks for sharing your world with us.
Enjoyable a third chapter I hope is on the cards.
We know you hear this a lot but we have to repeat, you are the GREATEST! You write in a way that is so real we can imagine being there. Kudos also for not leaving us hanging, anxiously awaiting!
Hawk & Honey!
So sorry, A.R.! I could only give you 5 stars! Would have given you more, but they won't let me! I second or third or forth the motion that there be another chapter! But only after a period of repose. Maybe in a couple of months. But, in the interim, I'd love to read a Mae and Dede tryst story. Just the two of them! And, of course, we need to get Dede and Mae and Jack together for an FFM. That will need to include some serious Dede and Mae bisexual activities as Jack watches! Great as usual, A.R.!
If I could select 10 I would do so. Awesome story, detailed and believable. You kept it real. Can't wait for chapter 3. Thank you AR!
I saw that there six comments as I got to the bottom of page one. Then at the bottom of page two there were seven comments. Then as I finished page four and flipped to look at all the comments, an eighth appeared! Neat to know I was reading this in real time with others.
Althea, I cannot compliment you enough. You have it all: the humor, the dialogue, the internal thoughts, and of course, a wonderful description of some very nice raunchy fucking.
And your telling of the ass-fucking was exquisite. Your words of caution just made me look with greater expectations.
And a bonus! You had Marcy going down on Brianna. So very nice. I sorta hoped you'd have her switch to Alexis, but one can't have everything, I know. Eating sisters, yummy!
Thank you, this tale was most enjoyable.
Woodslord.
Your relationship between DeDe and Mae reminded me very much of the hesitancy and acceptance of Gwen and her SIL, Natalie, as related by BusyBadger, in his series.
Excellent story Althea, thanks very much. I was pleased to read how he gained some much talent at loving for such a young man.
I am new to this site but love to read your well constructed stories. A.F.C. Somerset.
Another great story told by a master story teller !
Five stars all the way, keep it going please.
I have never commented on a Single story I have read as of to date here on this site, but I have scored them here nonetheless. I realize this is not the types of writing you would be reading in a novel, or fiction, (Lwell except for a polish to a boring read), but I found myself cheering the folks on in this story . Even saying at one point out loud, "that a girl!". I may even for the first time show this to my wife of 20 years. Well maybe not, LOL it does push well past all of her comfort zone.
But I thought I would say whats on my mine for once, and say,
Thank you, on behalf, of all of us that read stories in the shadows, seeking that for which is the most natural of Free-flowing words, thank you for finding a way to express what we are all really feeling and desiring.
An excellent story Althea. So many wonderful ingredients and possibilities for a lot of different future adventures. My only criticism is, I liked it so much I wasn't ready for it to end. Major Kudos ! xo
OMG, this was so hot and nicely written! It brought back fond memories of two older women I was able to spend some time with. Not at the same time, I would have exploded. But when you're 19 and have a fling with a beautiful lady of 26, you learn things. Twenty-three with a 35-year-old was even better. Thanks for the reminder.
Wow! Memories of the erotic bliss of my mid-twenties, when my girlfriend was a decade older, come flooding back. Superbly written, great voice, AltheaRose! Very satisfying.
Absolutely fantastic - thanks for romanticizing the intimacy that these women enjoyed. The mom with her daughters was wonderful too - I have some of that coming up - positive parenting I am thinking. Wow, you've got the moves! Write some more and make me melt again.
As everyone has commented, brilliantly written! Great comedic parts too.
Third part ? Yes please. Dede/Marcy there's definitely a story there left open. That can be explored, (with Cody watching/participation & course Mae has to included somewhere)
Kudos x
Wow ! Probably the best story I've read on here !
Any chance of a follow up story with some of these characters. It's been 4 years on so what happens? You could have Dede in a threesome with Cody & Marcy. Maybe Mae scoring with Dede's twin girls? With 4 years on introduce a new male character with Jack written out altogether ? An interracial encounter? The mind boggles of course!
Anyways, love ❤️ your stories, hope you're back here very soon. Pete x
Wunderbar geschrieben. Erinnert mich an meine mittlere Zeit. Als ich eine wunderbare Frau und ihre Tochter kennen gelernt habe.. Du schreibst Wunderbar.
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well done, liked this sexual romp very much,, a fling but a very romantic fling..
Such a juicy situation and hot sex - a pleasure. And I enjoyed the buildup in Part 1 just as much or even more!