All Comments on 'Could You Be Loved?'

Well played on that first bit. Easily well built. I liked that the story and background of each character and in essence helped show the two breaking down a boundary they both built. It was really a romantic story and the lust between each of them was strong. You gave minute details each character which seemed form fitting. You let the emotion begin the most descriptive which made the story easier to read.

Sex was just perfect, there wasn't much, but the teasing and the breaking point for both characters was spot on. Well done and great story.

You have a way with description that's exemplary. Please keep writing.

5 stars.

Nice writing. Very sensitive. In the beginning, I thought he had his dick in her ass! You developed the characters well, esp. Therese. How polite. And then...the kiss, from which there was no retreat. 3 years? My God, what a dry spell. Nice coaching on kisses on the neck. So convincing; you could tell Antonia was dripping, easy to climax, and wanting cock so bad.

Thanks for writing; please do more. xoxoxo, MOI