by the_ontarian
Well I was hard for the entire story with an extremely happy ending…… thank you
Masterfully well written, I was completely brought into the tension, drama, sensuality & sexuality, the characters & story descriptiveness & pacing were excellent. The XXX parts are fantastically detailed; not too much and not too little. Personally I was jerking from the first massage till the very end so much so that it took nearly 2.5 hours for me to finish this because of hot the whole story was @the_ontarian thank you so much for sharing the masterpiece you are a GOAT. Please continue with Kristen, Heidi and Paul's adventures would love to hear more especially about Kristen's BF ;). Once again thanks so much for this, incredible writing!
Bravo! Despite a couple of grammatical errors, this was an easy 5 stars for me!
Great story! The characters and storyline were believable and well developed. It just begs for a sequel or two. Maybe one more FFM encounter and then bring in Heidi's boyfriend.
Excellent! My wife and I both read it. I was hard and dripping from start to end you nailed it!
What a great story and descriptive enough to visualize the scene. A solid 10 out of 5 and an author I will follow. I like the idea of bringing the boyfriend into a fourway erotic encounter.