All Comments on 'Course of Passion Ch. 01'

Okay, this was a pretty decent if not spectacular effort. The only thing I will criticize is something that I've seen once or twice before on this site. NO woman will allow a man to go from ass to vagina bareback. It simply doesn't happen as it is a serious health issue. But I'll let that slide as a combination of naivete and wishful thinking. In the future you could have the guy use a condom for anal and then take it off for vaginal. Apart from that, the dialogue and sex were pretty good.

I really liked this story and the detail used. Definally a great writer!!