All Comments on 'Cousin'

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Frankie1952Frankie1952over 3 years ago

Fantastic, reminds me of my girl cousins but at least its legal in australia. Please dont stop here. what happens next? Did he knock her up? Do they decide to have a relationship? Get caught?

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
lousy writing and spelling

No such thing as an aureole although that is a common misspelling here. Learn proper sentence structure and punctuation or get an editor.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
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Keep it going

bshell47bshell47over 3 years ago
Beautiful story

Please continue

I think many of us have a fantasy of a cousin.

Can’t wait for the next chapter

Sman4444Sman4444over 2 years ago

Great story and love making descriptions keep writing!

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