by LadysMan
Wonderful story. Great lead up to the climax, though the final coming together of your characters is a bit lack luster. The passion is implied well, but it seems a bit rushed. Excellent writing. Keep up the good work.
I'd love to read another story about them, or maybe Mike's interactions with Kathleen :)
This story needs to be continued. There is so much more that could be told about those two.
My cousin Sherri had a child not too long ago. She is with her husband still unlike in the Mistaken Identity stories. Out of all my cousins though Sherri is the one I would fall for the deepest. If she was not my cousin I would have married her. She was just my type of woman in looks, attitude and overall fun. I miss her, but realize things had to end.
I like watching the tension build as they tease each other, getting closer until... YES!