All Comments on 'Cousin's Lust in the Occult'

To be continued maybe?

Thanks for taking the time to read this. It's my first story and all feedback is welcome! I hope to write a lot more and my cousin will definitely be involved in some ;)

First and only story I've read so far from yours. It was a good read, kind of funny with all the silly paganism. Although, a little nasty with the panties thing... Too bad for the many typos, grammar issues and errors, too. For example: "you're" =/= "your"; "letter" =/= "litre" (UK), "liter" (US); "there" =/= "their" =/= "they're"; apostrophes don't make words into plurals; missing/wrong words and so on... Next time read after typing to get those issues fixed before posting, and you'll get a story that fluids much better for reading.

I would like to read a sequel, by the way, to know how these two will keep their love and naughty situations hidden from their mothers and family.

Cheers.

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