All Comments on 'Covidiots Pt. 01'

Decent enough start, partial to Reds. So you have me ready for chapter 2.

Great story I can't wait to read more.

I really like the story. Not rushed and easy to read. Good development in a short one page item.

Get me all warmed up and we go to beds. I need more of Red and your adventures.

Great development. Leaves you wanting more of the adventures of Red and her sexy brother!

It left me wanting more. Nice start.

Nice story, but just give characters a name instead of forever saying it wasn't their real name. This took away from the story and ensured that it was all fiction.

What a hot story this is going to pan out to be . Judging by your other two stories , this one holds merit enough for me to make the assumption that it’s the true story . I really like the passion you write with not only in the character development but in the situations they find themselves in , makes it feel as though any one of them could have been real , but my guess is this one ! Looking forward to more from you !

What an awesome story. Totally hot wild. Made me think back to me and sister and the images ive had.

“eyes the color of a Heineken bottle” damn that was an effective simile go off.

I have to say your description of that kiss got me going. It must be the best such word play I have enjoyed for a very long time. I am thinking of sending this to my sister!

keep writing. This is more than good.

martin

NbleGent45

What a let-down. I was looking forward to a really good story and then - nothing. Sorry,I was disappointed by your buildup then you drop it.

Well written prose. On point and beautiful.