by de_Vere
Well, besides the obvious sexy as hell, I am actually more impressed with the quality of the writing. A previous g/f was an author and I learned to appreciate the quality of what I was reading. You done well. :-)
I've really been enjoying this on-going series, thank you. Please continue more chapters please like 10 more
I've really been enjoying this on-going series, thank you. Please continue more chapters please like 10 more ok
A terrific series I've enjoyed every episode and looking forward to the next episode(s) ?.
Excellent series. Really enjoyable reading. Hope you will be able to provide us with some updates.
I have really enjoyed this series and hope this is not the end of the story.
To the author, you take up valuable space with a description of what has already happened at the start of each new chapter. If readers are not smart enough to figure out that reading the first chapter and then the second ad naseum, they are too stupid to be reading anything written/posted on literotica.
I've enjoyed alot of this story but it seems that perhaps thou have run out of words before any chapters conclude.
This is constructive criticism, not meant to offend you, I don't have half the writing abilities that you do.
Keep up the good work. I'm looking forward to the next chapter, preferably without having to see the last chapters in print again.