All Comments on 'Coyote's Trick Pt. 01-02'

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richie78richie78almost 3 years ago

Curious to see where you'll take this.

chipmonk9chipmonk9almost 3 years ago

The story is neet but I hope in later chs you give more details on why the coyote chose the MC

chipmonk9chipmonk9almost 3 years ago

I hope in later chs you explain why the coyote chose the MC

PolyDomDaddy306PolyDomDaddy306almost 3 years ago

Very good start, I hope this becomes a series.

Vincent612Vincent612almost 3 years ago

Great story, give us some more chapters :-)

SlofredSlofredalmost 3 years ago

Well Written 5 stars for and a great start. But I would rather read more about Enki and the puzzle.

rawlyrawlsrawlyrawlsalmost 3 years agoAuthor

Chapters 1 - 5 are complete. Chapters will arrive on Literotica about a month apart.

If you want to read them sooner, or feel like supporting my writing, you can do that here: https://rawlyrawls.com

Thanks for reading!

LookOldButFeelYoungLookOldButFeelYoungalmost 3 years ago

Fuckin too stupid for words. Give it up..............

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Good start. Let’s see where you take this. Thanks.

OOAAOOAAalmost 3 years ago

Very hot story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Stop writing makes no sense there has to be some interesting story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I honestly think this author is a Satan worshipper.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I prefer enki and other stories. This isnt bad, but this formula is getting old. This is an odd story, just not my cup of tea.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

This is awesome stuff...

Galama88aGalama88aalmost 3 years ago

Can't wait for the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Sort of Sci-Fi stuff. Different.

Diecast1Diecast1almost 3 years ago

Interesting story. AA++

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Really got into it. Can't wait till the next chapter comes out. A Plus.

UAlbanyGirl518UAlbanyGirl518over 2 years ago

Great story, 5 *s! I don’t usually read supernatural stuff but this is well written and compelling. Onto the next chapter…AaaaRooooo!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

RUBBISH !!! Total & complete rubbish.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Didn’t like this one. To bare bones for the subject.

Too little sex to rescue it. 2 stars.👎

Bill S.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Didn't like this too much junk!!!!!!!!!!! a 2!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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