All Comments on 'Cramped in the Closet Ch. 02'

Keep up the great work. You have a real talent.

You do have a fine talent. Not so much detail that story drags on, but not so short on details that it becomes a quick story with no imagination. Good job!

Yes, so hot and a good story for sure .... hopefully they both don't want to stop having sex together and do not, either. Rachel now knows what its like to have hard, hot and extremely pleasurable sex. She wants it and that's it. So, she hopefully decides it will continue whether Mom and Dad like it or not. Nate does too and what they don't know is that Mom and Dad while very upset - realize they were like that too before marriage and have been trying to get back what their kids just discovered. So, they decide to monitor things But let them do it at home vs. driving them away and / or out of the house to do it. Mom gets Rachel on the morning after pill and birth control immediately. Mom teaches her what she needs to know and then the kids go at it ..... I think that would be a great way to continue looking at this whole situation from the kids hormone / new experience point of view. Maybe, Rachel will give Daddy some of it and Mom from Nate ?? So hot, cannot wait for more. Thanks.

we need a part 3, maybe the kids stay at it and mom gives up and joins in because dad is clueless and has nothing to do with her... Please keep up the good work..

You pretty much have to make a part 3 based off of this one. The build up off of mom is damn near spot on for a great part 3/4!

Y the last man?

That was awasome, brilliant, it was so good i felt i could of been there watching getting turned on so bad ....

Look forward so much to the next brilliant chapter

Thanks for such a vivid story, loved it, loved it, loved it ...

Laughed my ass off well done

a great incest sexcom.

I can't wait to read all stories.

Had my cock so hard. Can't wait to read a second time.

Loved it! yea I could see it the family the dad the mum all wondering what the fuck they should do looking at the scene and then eating the birthday cake brilliant! Poor dad trying to deal with it ha ha and the sis turns into a nympho Its so fucked up! Would make a good movie Its rare Im impressed by stuff on here but I am impressed great piece of writing. Thanks

I nice mix of story and sex. You capture the emotions of the characters. Rather than a lust fueled sex trip their are emotions hidden that come out and get shown. And a few comedic things still in there "dying in the best way possible" being a good example. Full stars

I've been waiting a long time for this and you didn't disappoint, amazing writing and the fact Rachel did all those things made my blood boiled. great work and about to read ch 03

Enjoying this off-the-wall series.

One of the best, if not the best story I’ve read on here. Absolutely hilarious, had me in stitches and I enjoyed the erotic sex scenes! A refreshing and innovative change from the usual, predictable brother/sister incest formula.