All Comments on 'Crash-n-Burn Ch. 05'

Too much detail, slowing the story down.

I couldn't stop reading it after I found the story on the website. Keep up the good work!

Pay no attention to the "too much detail" comments, I was a bit sad knowing that this is the next to the last installment. I have thoroughly enjoyed this story. I like your style of writing and you make very few mistakes, so unlike much of the writing the story and sex are balanced and the grammar and spelling are pretty darned good as well.

I read stories with mistakes and my brain just corrects the error, they do not really bother me or keep me from reading a story unlike comments from others on other stories would lead one to believe.

I do find that I enjoy well written stories much more than ones that need considerable mental correction.

Again excellent work, sorry to see it draw to a close with the coming 6th in the series.

Neat story based in the Hammer!! Love it.

An amazing story. It's a pleasure to read a story with such clear detail and a few twists thrown in as well. A truly great effort for your first story here and I eagerly await to see what happens in chapter 6.

Guess the shitvshould hit the fan when all is admitted. He fucked and impreganated his mother. She fucked her whatever-his-mother-relationship-to-Estelle-is.

Secrets never make for good relationships.

Like the big secret of Estelle's past. The runaway, drugs and guns and no sex. Must have missed why she suddenly had sex with him. I thought it was not gonna happen.