by chezshirecat
Really enjoyed this story. Excellent writing.
Good dialogue. Enough humour in it to be really interesting.
Now I'm wondering about the kids that should come along and whatever happened to Andi and Pete??
Anothe sequel series?
This was just a really nice story and I enjoyed it immensely! Thanks so much.
I repeat, this story was a pleasure to read! It made me feel good all day! Romance is great when done this well.
Damn, Damn gooooood!!!! One hell of a good story, LOVED the ending, can't wait for more from this same story line like the one this was taken from...Absolutely great.
I loved the story and the romance. The writing was excellent and makes me want more from you. Thanks.
I really enjoyed all three chapters. Great Job, and keep up the good work
Lovely character, would love to read about Jake and Heather
fer jake and heather, "Innocent Sins' - not nearly so sweetness and light.
Green-something
I really enjoyed your story. I wish you would write more about them. I really fell in love with the characters.
Great to this point. No way to improve on what you have thus far offered. I wouldn't suppose that you would think to give us just an inkling of where Pete has gotten to?
Yeah it was ok to a point, but she was just so negative the whole time. It got annoying. I mean I don't like women who can't ever be vulnerable, to a guy. Her big letting go was just to say I love you. I am sorry I wanted her more apologetic, and more being sorry she was such a bitch all the time.
That message about 'Ben' like she did Kevin, Cassie would never had to wonder if she would ever hear from or see me again. But then we would not have had this marvelous story. My only question is what ever happened to that POS Pete? People like him don't just get better or go away because of a protection order. Any judge that would let him out on bail after putting his wife in the ER and leaving that threatning voice mail on Cassi's machine ought to find his ass in his own jail. Signed: BTW
Great series until the last lines. Be careful trying to change the mind of someone who is resolutely childfree. It seldom ends well.
The last lines really aren't right. Trying to change someone's mind about kids is NOT gonna work out. One will resent the other for it.