All Comments on 'Craziest Summer Ever'

Very enjoyable story!

5

Nicely done. Great read. 5*

Loved it!Thank you very much

Fun story, Trionyx! It was well written and the slow transition from icy, damaged goods to friend and much more was believable. Good luck in the contest.

Good story! This one made it a nice start to the week.

Little bit of a stretch, but maybe not too much, of having to fake a death to escape a deranged ex-fiancé. Otherwise, fun read with a great ending. 4.5*

Great story, love them ending in a family town.

Very enjoyable love story - good setup, great characters, a bit of drama (a lot of drama?) and you brought it all to a nice conclusion. It was fun to read. Thank you

A very nice tale Trionyx!! Great love still makes for the best sex!! 5- Stars, and wishing you good luck in the contest!!

A great story as always, Well Done! 5 stars for every page. 👏🏻👏🏻

God story ... you hit it "dead on".

great foreplay

Truly an enjoyable and loving story. Well done!!

Good story. I enjoyed it, hope wins the contest.

that was fun!

5*. Good read, very enjoyable

Very good story, enjoyed it immensely!!

Well done! Great storyline. Wonderful character development. Tension was just right. You did a great job with the progression of falling in love between Sharon and James. Looking forward to your next story. K

Loved it! The odd plot fault, but it reads well and works well as a romantic fantasy.

Didn't really care for it. Too cliche. As usual, alcohol was overly involved (I don't drink) and the part about a 19-year old being "too young" was insulting. Age differences should NEVER matter. 2*

Gotta Agree with both SothernCrossFire and Demosthenes384bc. Nice, slow transition and development.

Trevor getting out on bail after making _public_ threats, and then traveling a thousand miles or two in order to attack Sharon is, unfortunately, only a small stretch these days.

Fun, well written, but the story has too many plotholes. Many of their actions are not reasonable. The ex would be back in jail from breaking his bail conditions.

That was fun.

A very fun and enjoyable story

5stars

Fun, fun story!

cute fun story, thanks for writing

Very good story I enjoyed it. Great read.

Cheers

SAGE

Very fun story with an entertaining, offbeat plot. Don't ever remember a Lit. bad guy getting his shoulder crushed with a splitting maul, so bonus points for originality. While all the plot twists are by their individual selves believable, as a connected string of events they become most improbable. But it is after all a Lit. romantic fantasy so 5 stars for gifting us a bit of your talented writing!

Great story. Well written.👏

This one is a fun, inventive story. I enjoyed it thoroughly, so thank you for writing and thank you for sharing your work.

Good story, except for two related things sorely missing. He's a nature photographer, touring much of the amazing beauty of the USA, and not once do you mention him taking photos. Also, you missed an opportunity for him to sell the agent ideas for nature and wildlife photo books.

Not my cup of tea, seriously all their problems could’ve been solved instantly if James finished off Trevor and instead of that ending we got one we’re a narcissistic rapist is free, although the story would’ve ended quicker I think I prefer that ending, still, well written

Like Yogi said, "It ain't over 'til it's over." She and the ex need to swap life stories: Him dead, her back from the dead. Getting them there is up to you, of course. 5.

Good story, the author seems to include condoms in all his stories, no problem with that. but the way in which they are used is almost pointless. The oral sex almost negates the condoms. Most STDs transmit orally. Babies would be prevented, but not all STDs.