All Comments on 'Crazy Quickies: We Gotta Talk'

Good stuff. I know the feeling.

Your depiction of how black people talk is just ignorant. If this is the best you can do, then you should quit.

Good English by the son, but a ridiculous way of speaking by mommy. I did think Thelma on "Good Times" was very fuckable. Thin with nice tits that I'd enjoy sucking while we were fucking.

Just die!

What the fuck was that.?

To short,

Bad Inglish.....sorry, ENGLISH, PLEASE.

if you wanna make it more interesting to the readers, you must follow these :

1. Correct spelling of the words in the language your writing in.

2. Dont make it too short,

3. Make the story, sound like a story,

4. Finally, dont take short cuts the story,

Please, because this story could have potential.

Why do you think it just your culture of black people, there are several ethnic groups of backs ... I know for sure 50 ethnic groups of white and if everyone talked the same sound the same and was of 1 culture it would be a boring world.