All Comments on 'Cream'

by DawnJ

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NitpicNitpicabout 2 months ago
What

What a wimp.His wife rings to ask him to let a teenager fuck her and he doesn't say no

Noelrosa160Noelrosa160over 6 years ago
Loved!

Has always been my dream to be in the same position as the male character in this story.

demure101demure101about 10 years ago
Brilliant!

This is erotic in the best sense of the word! Great writing, Dawnj!

Brett78xBrett78xabout 10 years ago
About those one page submissions

I usually am not one for one page submissions. They tend to lack substance and reflect a lazy approach to story telling. You Dawn, truly are the exception. Thank you for a great start to an intriguing story!

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