All Comments on 'Cream & Coco Ch. 01'

Great writing abrupt ending.

I feel like a single mother would know where the shutoff valve to a sink is though. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

1/2 a story. FTDS

Don't bother with any more parts. You blew this one right out of the gate.

Decent start. A bit contrived, but I didn’t expect Dickens. Now, on to part 2…

5*

Tc

Glad to welcome a talented new author

Thank you so much for this slow start. I enjoyed your gentle wording and the storyline. Please continue to write in YOUR style. Cheerio…