All Comments on 'Creating Constellations'

I enjoyed it but kinda knew where it was going to end up when you gave everyone’s occupation.

Pick a name and stick to it. Grace, Rae, Lexi, Lex and X all within one paragraph is annoying a spoilt the flow for me.

Fantastic story!

Great story, but have to agree it was hard to keep up with the names.

So much potential; hard to keep track of who was who when the key players had 2-3 names, sometimes in the same sentence.

Great story and characters and passionate sex. Nice to see how the two couples end up finding their other half and all of them together adding to the growth and success of the brewery. Sad to see their "getting away spot" yielding to the masses, but that is the way of things in the age of TikTok and social media postings. Sweet to see them all embrace having a family. I agree with the name issue; took some time to get it sorted out in my head.