by sunburycd
This desperately needs a series involving all the videos they make.
love how you make dialogue and manerisms seem real. way better than most.
well done.
only minor mistakes or issues here and there. makes me interested in what else you have written or going to write.
One of the best mother/son stories I've read. Good dialog and excellent descriptions of their feelings and sexuality. 5 stars!
I truly enjoyed this story, although kind of a new twist on an old story line but with the desired effect, son and his mother together...makes my mind wonder back to many of my own fantasies of just such a thing.
*standing ovation*
Very nicely written. I especially enjoyed the slow, tantalizing build-up in the first half. The second half went perhaps a little too fast. Instead of the first video rushing straight into hardcore porn, they could have built up towards it, as they slowly become more comfortable with each other. Penetrating mommy should have been maybe the fourth video.
Example: Mom shows son a pic of a foot in nylon and heels, covered with cum. She wants to upload a vid showing just a cock being masturbated and cumming on her foot. No faces, no actual contact.
You get the idea.
But still - a nice twist to the mom and son scenario, and very well written.
... seemed confusing to me. I couldn't tell what was being filmed or not.
Yet again you delight and arouse your lucky readers. Loving the slow pace beginning before building up to the inevitable coupling. Very nicely written as usual. Regards from South Lomdon.
I enjoyed this one, the crazy son always
looking the other way. mom wants him,
and she'll do anything, I thing the ice
bucket dunk was crazy on her part.
But all works out.
...THANKS...
This is a great little story. I loved the mom who starts out all "innocent." Plus I'm way into legs and pantyhose and dresses riding up, so this was hitting some big high points for me. Thank you.