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by DonP

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AzuldrgonAzuldrgonabout 17 years ago
Interesting

That was ore of a subdued form of seduction. I think that the story about the crimefighter would have been a better diversion if it turned more realistic. Maybe less of an intro about the complex questions. Maybe start with the decision for both to lose their pants before going into the superhero story.

The sex scene was nice. Not too outlandish, but warm and sweet.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Very Creative

This is a different and creative twist to the art of seduction. I really liked it. Keep on writing.

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