All Comments on 'Crime & Punishment: The Prequel Ch. 07'

All women cheat, it is natural. All men will take it. Robots. Such crap. Same thing over and over again in his stories.

I am having trouble with the time linr, but still love the story.

Thank you you continuing.

I really dislike this character in your story, well written it maybe but.....I struggle to understand why someone like "Foxy" would entertain such a bitch? Not only that but why would Pat even acknowledge her as his friends wife.... urmmmmm....I enjoy reading your material but this woman.....I read in the hope of her terrible demise.....hahaha...clever that Richard!

interesting tale and the intersections with other RG characters.. Enjoying the story although would like the chapters to come faster.

Thanks.

I really really enjoy your work.

I do wish it wasnt so long between chapters.

Susan is not a very likeable character. I am sort of hoping he is having an affair to force her to change her behavior. Certainly he would need to if he ever wants to have kids.

So great writing, cant wait for the next part.

Still looking for an honest or decent person in your cast of characters. Maybe you could line them up somewhere and mow them down.

Boyd Percy

I am enjoying the continuation of these three lawyer's stories. I am not sure where we are in the time frame, as we have people who are dead still plotting to do away with Foxxy. Will be interested in how this plays out.

Thank you for sharing your story and your talent.

Thanks for posting and all of your work to keep us readers abreast of the happenings in Albany and outlying areas. This is very well written. My only problem is keeping all of the Irish names straight!

Glad to have the continuation of this complex tale. Keep it going, without making us wait so long, please!

By the way, it was Richard Croker.

Thank you!

This is a brilliant series and I can hardly wait for each chapter.

Nice series so far. The women in this series got a few loose screws though. Laura wants to save her husbands soul? That's weird considering what she's been doing. I do enjoy the characters.

My man.

There is a small problem with the rate the chapters are being posted. More! More!

One of the reasons I enjoy your stories so much is that, despite the human flaws, your lead characters tend to be folks it is easy to get behind. Due to the nature of short stories, if the author is skilled it leaves you wanting to know more about them and how they got to these positions in life. You have produced many such characters, but Patrick Sullivan and Steve Fitzgerald are two of your best. I look forward to the continuation of this story, but do not look forward to the inevitable end which I see on the horizon. One of the problems with the prequel format.

I was one of the edgy ones waiting for the continuation of this series. Thought that you were going to pull a Tx Tall Tales and not finish. (Hopefully nothing terrible has happened to him)

After "The Presumption of Guilt" all is forgiven. By far my favorite of the Magical Mystery Tour submissions, which is hard to admit with how much I enjoy Girlinthe Moon's work. But in this case, it may be one of my top ten story favorites here.

Anyway, as long as you care to entertain, I will be following. Thanks for taking the time.

This is your best, and they were all really good. Story development ties everything together, thanks for all of the hard work. 5*

the layers never cease. shake one off. more arise TK U MLJ LV NV

Women who cheat with impunity, men who just accept it. Nice how you are tying a bunch of previous shitty stories in this one. This twice as bad now.

They will be eaten by the wolf and the fox.

The plot thickens, good writing and editing!

Cheating sluts no morals and ok

What a wonderful day

Not

Even before reading this series I truly disliked Susan, didn't care at all for Laura and hoped Simone (the lady doctor) would be slaughtered in some tribal shitstorm. As for Frank, Tony and the scumbag doctors, they could be happily drawn and quartered but of the women Susan is the most offensive, hypocritical piece of slutmeat ever. How about arranging a gang rape/murder for her and maybe her mother and sister as well!