All Comments on 'Criminal Affair Pt. 06'

Oh please hurry more chapters. So good, Five Stars!

I never expected to start to care about the charters in this story the way I do. Well done on creating a gripping story.

I kept waiting for Derek to get a call from Link, telling him Jill was shot. Nice job building anxiety, while Derek had to deal with the heinous murder. No parent wants to hear about mistreated children, clearly that impacted Derek’s reaction at the crime scene. Then he learned about Jill’s shooting? Wow!

Nice going with the story and the action. Didn't like to read about the prognosis for Jill.

Great story. great writing!