All Comments on 'Criminal Affair Pt. 08'

Happy to see this story keeps getting told.

One of the best stories I have read on Literotica by far. Have you ever written any novels as your style of writing is really great.

Tightly written

Plot beyond the sex

Characters appear real

AND I FIND ITS A CURRENT STORY WITH CHAPTERS TO COME!

Great character development. By random chance, Jill triggered events that forced her to accept her failings, and admit the need to change. If Jill hadn’t talked to Billie, she’d have rationalized her cheating, and Derek would not have simply turned his back. She wouldn’t have heard his brutally honest characterization of her behavior.

Derek should just stay away from her. She’s a whore on two legs. I really wish he would have told her what she said to him. It feels like the author is trying to make her more sympathetic or be nice to her by not reminding her what horrible things she said. Not only did she say terrible things to him when he was trying to help her, she goes and cheats on him with another man....yea, no thanks.

First off, great job with writing Jill’s character, in our world there are people who successfully close off sections of their life to prevent bleed-through, high stress jobs are the most prone to it psychologically - exactly as you’ve written Jill. Someone like that who “lives the job” but then has it taken away from them by forces beyond their control lose a lot of their sense of self worth, personal identity, drive and determination, suicide rates go way up as well.

As for anon’s “Whore on two legs” comment? Go away troll, or maybe go back to your 4 legged whores, the oink oink ones maybe, nobody else would use words like that, dumbass.

Excellent writing. Great character arc! Dialogues are crisp and to the point.