All Comments on 'Criminal Affair'

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mcollectmcollectover 6 years ago
I hope there is more.

Great beginning, so please let it continue.

Admiralbird348Admiralbird348over 6 years ago

Awesome start! I like your writing style!

Please keep going:)

Thanks!!

Ed

tangledweedtangledweedabout 6 years ago
I like where this is going.

Nice, tight writing style. The narration sounds like a classic detective story and fits perfectly. No wasted words, just pithy observations and facts moving things along.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Damn

Excellent and concise. A rare combination.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Wow

Love it,Can't wait to get started...

JBEdwardsJBEdwardsover 3 years ago

No nonsense kind of writing, reminds me of Jim Thompson. Very enjoyable! 5* ~~JBE

phantommasterphantommasteralmost 3 years ago

Jack Reacher. If Lee Child was an erotic writer...

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Liked the story but it sounded like an incident report.

oldpantythiefoldpantythiefover 1 year ago

Quick and dirty, now on to the next.

RangeExpanderRangeExpanderabout 1 year ago

This one feels simplistic but I am going to keep going with the series....

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

I like this series, a good story. I have a serious question. Can someone explain to me the compulsion to go fuck random men without love, and without sexual orgasm? It just doesn't make sense to me. What would drive someone to live such a degraded life? It's a serious question, I don't understand what is going on in a person's head that acts this way and would really like some insight.

chytownchytown4 months ago

*****Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

This is a good one.

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