by CaffeineFetish
Awesome start! I like your writing style!
Please keep going:)
Thanks!!
Ed
Nice, tight writing style. The narration sounds like a classic detective story and fits perfectly. No wasted words, just pithy observations and facts moving things along.
No nonsense kind of writing, reminds me of Jim Thompson. Very enjoyable! 5* ~~JBE
This one feels simplistic but I am going to keep going with the series....
I like this series, a good story. I have a serious question. Can someone explain to me the compulsion to go fuck random men without love, and without sexual orgasm? It just doesn't make sense to me. What would drive someone to live such a degraded life? It's a serious question, I don't understand what is going on in a person's head that acts this way and would really like some insight.