Crimson Reborn Ch. 11

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Eric knew too well the sound of cow hooves walking on a hard surface. The clacking sound echoed out of a small door to the side of the throne preceding the creature his daughter had become. He wanted to look away, but couldn't bring himself to do it. Emily was undeniably beautiful. Her hips swayed as she walked forward out of the shadows on a pair of black hooves. Chestnut brown fur covered her from the ankle up to her head where it became a shaggy mane of mostly human locks. Her face had been stretched out into the smiling muzzle of a half cow, half human thing. A pair of sizable breasts jutted out from her chest, which was mostly white furred. Blushing, Eric could see his daughters nipples and the faint hint of moisture that let him know she, like her mother, was ready to give milk at a moment's notice. As the war raged in his soul, his eyes followed her form down to the pair of dark lips between her legs, the furry wide ass that swung behind them, and the tail that swished when she walked.

"Hi daddy," she said in a resonant voice, though she clearly offered no affection in her words. She paid him no more mind and climbed the throne to kneel before Cain. Her mouth opened and a thick tongue lolled out to lick up and down Cain's rapidly hardening shaft. From her kneeling position, Eric could see her lips more clearly beneath her spread ass cheeks. Self loathing clogged his throat. He thought he might vomit. Instead, another minuscule orgasm made him twitch as another small glob of cum oozed out from his shriveled dick.

Cain laughed, putting his hand on the back of Emily's head and encouraging her to lick and suck his growing cock. "We all get what we deserve in the end, Eric. You had these two beautiful creatures at your disposal for twenty years and what did you teach them. Did you glorify their bodies? Did you worship between your wife's legs? Did you teach your daughter that the world is full of ripe joy ready for the plucking? No, you showed them both the demented religion of chastity. You did it in passing words and dismissive laughs. That's why you'll suffer here."

"This is all just a bad dream," Eric muttered. A strange smell had caught his attention, causing his mouth to water and his heart to flutter. "A bad dream!"

Cain grabbed the back of Emily's head and shoved it down on his thick cock. It pulsed in her throat as it pumped cum into her belly. Neither of them slowed in their carnal diversion. Emily pulled his cock out of her mouth, still hard, and slurped the cum off of it. As Eric watched, he knew why his mouth was watering. He wanted to have that cum in his mouth too. And he knew where to get some.

He jumped over the railing like a madman and went up behind his wife. He'd seen her naked plenty over the years and the wall of delectable flesh with thick, cum drenched pussy lips was something out of a wonderful nightmare. Eric dropped to his knees behind Nancy, her engorged pussy lips glistening with her own arousal and Cain's cum leaking out between them. He grabbed her thick thighs and pressed his face forward, tongue running up her slit as he slurped down the corruptive fluid. Nancy mooed and wiggled in his grip as the pumps whirred louder. Eric licked and sucked, bringing one hand up to slide fingers into his wife. He'd never gone down on her before, not even once, but now he regretted it. She tasted divine and her new size let her pussy cover almost his entire face. He even wondered if his head could fit inside of her. He settled for most of his hand. Nancy mooed again, her ass pressing back against the invading tongue, and a fresh gush of her arousal coated his face.

"Careful," Cain said. Emily had crawled up into his lap, resting in his arms as he lowered her up and down on his cock. "For you, this will hurt."

A stab of pain shot through Eric's stomach. He fell back, thudding onto the ground, his head hitting with a sickening thwack. All across his body, his skin started to burn, like a thousand needles pushing in and out with impossible speed. He tried to scream, but only a feminine squeak came out of his throat. Clawing at his clothes, he tried to get free, but the changes had already began. His body swelled rapidly, doubling in size. For a moment, he thought he might wind up looking like Cain, a new god ready to fight to win back his family. That dream died almost instantly as he felt a bizarre pressure on his chest. He tore away his shirt just as his nipples puffed from flat brown dots into broad, pink mounds. The hair on his chest turned to dust as the flesh underneath the puffy nipples swelled. Arching his back, he writhed on the ground as his breasts doubled and then tripled in size.

"Help me! Please! Nancy!"

If she heard him, she didn't acknowledge it with anything more than another moo and the brief thought of want for more cock. Eric brought his hands to his chest and impulsively squeezed his new nipples. Milk gushed out of them, slathering over his body and somewhat dulling the needle like pain. A new sensation distracted him. His hands moved down between his legs to grab at his shriveled cock. He felt a tension, like someone had either side of him and was pulling hard. His balls jerked up into his body and his scrotum went smooth beneath his shrinking dick. A final glob of cum shot out to splash on his thigh before tearing began. Eric felt each centimeter of his skin parting while his cock continued to shrivel. After an agonizing minute, the tearing sensation stopped and a feeling of immense emptiness overwhelmed him. His hand groped for his dick, but found only an engorged clit at the crest of a pair of pussy lips just like his wife's.

Eric tried to stand, but as he rolled to his knees, the weight of his new breasts kept him on the ground. The nipples dragged against the floor causing him a great deal of discomfort, and the new gravity caused his swelling milk pressure to cause great discomfort. Trying to hold himself up, he was aware of his ass swelling, growing bigger and bigger until it jiggled with even the smallest movement. Master will like the feeling of it when he fucks me. "No, what?! What the fuck was that?" It was like another voice had pushed his own mind to the side. He looked up at Cain, but his view was obscured by Emily walking toward him, cum running down her thighs. In her hands, she held a collar with a bell on it. Eric shook his head and tried to ask his daughter for help, but all that came out was "Moo!"

Emily gently put the collar around his neck, then pulled it tight, pinching his skin. Her hand stroked down his back and she spoke, "There now, it's almost over. You're a cow now, daddy. Just like mommy. You'll be fucked and give milk. You'll get to watch me get fucked and give milk too. Forever. And more cows will join us. Cain says that when we have a bigger herd, you'll be able to play together. You can lick each other's pussies and drink each others milk and suck and fuck Cain's big, thick cock. He's even thinking about getting some more help around once the herd's bigger. He's more than enough man for everyone, of course, but he can't fuck two holes at once. And, really, I want him to myself. We want to see if we can make babies. Come on now, don't fuss. Let's get you in your stall."

Eric didn't resist as she led him forward, his ass swaying as he crawled into the milking station. Emily guided him onto the cushions, pushing his swollen breasts down between the slat. With the bench to hold his weight, being on his hands and knees was much more comfortable. Emily brought over the suction cups and attached them. As soon as the machine clicked on, his breasts gushed milk and the pressure lessening sent a wave of relief over him. Not so bad, one voice said. No, not so bad, Eric agreed.

He sensed warmth behind him. Cain's cock pressed against his virgin lips. "Time to brand you, so to speak," Cain said. His wide palms gripped Eric's plush ass as he sunk into the new cow's wet folds. "Eric won't do of course. Don't want to accidentally alarm someone visiting. Erica will work though. That way we still know its you. If we bother keeping track of your name." His cock slid deeper into Erica. She sighed with contentment.

Erica's head turned to the side. Emily stroked her breasts, urging out her milk. One stall over Nancy watched with her blank, happy stare. Being a cow isn't so bad, Erica thought. At least my family is together. Cain slammed hard into her and filled her with cum.

The last remnant of Eric flickered and vanished.

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chifighterchifighterover 4 years ago

Liked the first one second one looking better

Quixerotic1Quixerotic1over 4 years agoAuthor
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It's more instinctual for flora and fauna to stay away from the corruption, but as Lucy's grip on her power grows that instinct can be overridden. And likely will be in a future story.

***RedPandaSeven

You're right, Ch 05 is a little weird because its when I had to step away for a while. When I came back to the story, I needed something fresh to get back in the groove. One other problem with the family story is the incest component which is a little haphazard to work around. That said, I do have some plans for them in the future.

As a general answer to the other questions, what we've seen so far is the infrastructure for Lucy's new dominion. The farm is going to be central to the more insidious corruption throughout town as well as a de facto place to deposit corrupted people, akin to the strip club in the first series. That's why I wanted to draw out each of those stories a little more, but the effect was to spend way too much time away from Lucy herself. The next entries will correct that while also bringing back a lot of the established characters.

As another general note, yes, there are a lot of threads left dangling intentionally. Any one of these stories could be fleshed out into a full 20k word work, but for this series its better to leave more what ifs so that I can get to the transformations.

RedPandaSevenRedPandaSevenover 4 years ago

I have conflicting reactions to this series and now the Cain and his cows done for now, I am a little disappointed that we didn't get something similar with David and Jillian at their place of work. To be honest, I've felt that Chapter 5 could have used a follow up as it just seems out of place to the narrative so far and nothing has really paid off with Helen, Nick, or Aly nor did we get to see Malcolm's transformation or reaction.

Going back and reading all the chapters of this series, it feels better planned out than the OG Crimson Milk series but I am left trying to timescale judge what is happened and how long has it been since Lucy transformed as it feels and reads like we are on day 2 or 3 since the event and yet it lacks some of the 'learning as she goes' that Mandi had in the first series. I am remiss that we didn't get 4 or 5 chapters of Lucy settling into her role and her making missteps as Jillian her first/second creation is left not being able to be her new self yet; and we just left with Cain being King of Milk which to me seems at odds with how Crimson was going to do it differently this time.

I am left wondering several dangling threads or ideas

1. Is David now fully just a fucktoy with a large dick? Is he functional outside of servicing Lucy in the shower and the bed? Did he go to work the next day?

2. How does Jillian's block/instructions impact her? She changed Sam into a Minotaur and then nothing? Is there at work dalliance with David or other coworkers? Does she work with David to spread Crimson there? If David no longer works, is she there converting her coworkers to Lucy? Jillian is setup to be fun like Tiff or some of the others from Crimson Milk without getting anymore of her story yet.

3. Is Sam going to farm to help Cain fuck cows? Great transformation, yet feels like it lacks the payoff of Lucy now having a brute following her about or what happens after Lucy gets him that night.

4. Nick/Helen/Aly/Malcolm : How did Lucy taint the milk? Is there a scene missing that happens before at the grocery store where Helen gets a taste of crimson and that is why she buys the milk to corrupt her family? OR is Chapter 5 supposed to be chronologically after Cain's Cows and that is how the town is going to start falling? [really want the follow up to this chapter] Mentioning the dynamic of the family and its relationship to the town and well as Lucy/David as; it seems more now a throw away tease and nothing of merit but I personally would like Nick/David/Jillian "trucking company whatever" shenanigans. Also David's dad owns the company? Lucy not going after that?

5. Alice/Oliver? was the sex-fiend demons Lucy's plan? or was it a mess up not knowing what Alice would do? Most people it seems Lucy/Crimson knows how to corrupt them and how to make them what they need to be to help the Crimson and yet those two don't seem to fit that mold and yet Lucy ends up there enjoying them. [also need the follow up to the tease there with the other ladies in the building as Lucy leaves for the Bethany chapter]

6. Bethany's garden was a great transition from town to the farm but I don't see how it otherwise fits into the story. Chapters 1-4 setup Lucy, chapters 5&6 setup neighbors as converts to the Crimson[but could just be filler], chapters 8-11 setup the dairy. I didn't feel as connected with Bethany's conversion as the rest.

7. How does Crimson impact wildlife? The horse was skittish but what about the cows from the dairy? Are they just lost to the pasture? Or are we getting some corruption/mutation/bestiality cause the milk needs to flow? Would dogs/cats/pets all react like the horse alerting the people around that something isn't quite right?

Lastly with both stories I am left with a bigger world question :

8. Would there be a Cult searching for the song? Does there exist a sex cult [Cult of Crimson] that has heard the stories/rumors and is actively looking for the song to pledge their loyalty to the Crimson? The people in the town all hear the faint song calling them, it seems to me that somewhere out there a group of people who have devoted themselves to carnal pleasure hears the music and want to be part of it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Love the corruption and changes in your story.

Am curious though, its obvious things like plants and animals know to stay away from the Crimson milk, we have seen what happens when a plant gets infected by it. What would happen if an animal like Samson got infected by it?

Quixerotic1Quixerotic1over 4 years agoAuthor

With Cain and the Swanson's corruption complete for the moment, my submission queue is now clear. On break for Thanksgiving and then putting my effort into getting my own site back to functional. When I can, I'll get the other pieces of the original Crimson Milk story up. To keep track of me, check my bio.

And thanks, again, for liking my stories.

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