All Comments on 'Critical Miss'

Your stories are always extremely entertaining, this one is no exception

I loved this story! All the description and characterization is top notch!

I really needed to read something like this. I can't thank you enough!

Now I'm going to desperately with i was in Grace's situation for weeks ;3;

Thank you

I really like this story, sweet and quirky. Not exactly what I was expecting so in the end better.

I wish I had the words to describe how wonderful I found this story. All I can say is that I wish more stories left me feeling this incredibly happy. I will be rereading this story whenever I find the need to feel better about life because to me, this story was that good.

J.D.

I found this and just started crying happy tears as I read. It's so well written and I love it!

Not erotica but a good story

This is such a wonderful story. Lovely to read. The world building is neat. * flings flowers at you*

This is so lovely omg

Second time reading this story. My only regret is that I didn't leave a glowing review last time and I can't give you a second 5-star rating this time. Oops, that's 2 regrets, still valid though!

"Probably some clothes" - I loved that line. And the bit where Anther was muttering about a d20 - hilarious. The whole tale was entertaining, even as the main character wrestled with transformation and preconceptions; serious and wise, yet still entertaining. And the sex scene was divine. That's some good storytelling.

I swear the Dungeon Master of the D&D games I role played in, forty years ago, was using our imagination to flesh out a storyline he was working on. This story could have come straight from our adventure log, and I loved every moment of it.

... It's a too bad he passed in the mid-eighties, he'd have loved this.

Thank you for this! This was so lovely! I will echo one of the other commenters. The sex was divine!

respectfully imma very big mork fan

I love Mork being so supportive and understanding. Good for Grace, glad she got things worked out. This fic is alot of fun