All Comments on 'Crone Ch. 04: Winter Drear'

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Elaine_MatureElaine_Mature7 months agoAuthor

Found this unpublished in a folder, I don't know why. Polished it up and here it is.

Next chapter will be very much more exciting! Spring brings out all sorts of feelings.

For now they endure

Oh! Should have put this under non-erotic category. I'm sorry, it's a disappointment in that regard. But wait and see what comes next!

dontyouwishyouknewdontyouwishyouknew7 months ago

I am very much interested in what comes next. I am glad you found this languishing and gave it the light of day.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

I really liked this.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

I loved this story & looking forward to the next chapter. It’s a really unusual combo… fairy/ shapeshifter character, down-to-earth hot human character, nothing bad happens (except at the start), detailed everyday getting through the day & negotiation, visitations of desire, power play / dynamic, slow burn - there’s so much here!

Elaine_MatureElaine_Mature5 months agoAuthor

Thank you! It was an interest of mine, that setting, that period. Not sure myself where it's going - will he become something more? Will she continue to be interested in him? I only find out as I write.

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Older author and reader, interested in emotionally significant writing with empathy and respect. New story on its last draft, about coming-of-age and a road trip. Not sure what to call it, but it features three young women catching a ride with a farm boy, headed for the big c...

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